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distillation v fabrication

the essence of self shows itself in word choices for revelations

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/22/2023 2:55:00 PM

pretty profound and thought-provoking words, Di11y! Well done...enjoy your evening, Sara

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/22/2023 3:05:00 PM

The more I think about it the more it means - they are funny those senyru's for that :) it's a mystery how we are all so different in composition x

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/22/2023 9:54:00 AM

I think so

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/22/2023 10:29:00 AM

As do I

Clive Culverhouse

Date: 11/22/2023 6:47:00 AM

I liked this one a lot, you can probably tell a lot from the word choices we make, something deep within us sends us words to use and it could be a revelation. Perhaps. Interesting thought provoking write D

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/22/2023 7:57:00 AM

I had an urge to write poetry but no time so wrote this but quite liked the idea. I do wonder about my own choices as the more I don't think about it but better the poetry. I do worry about people who compose their thoughts. I'm very instant haha