Distension's Tension

I can remember a February 
away back in nineteen seventy-four
'Twas a first meeting of my family
and my intended whom I'd spoken for.

Two hour ride to Kentucky's western part
with a basketball game planned to follow 
home-cooked meal - key to a son-in-law's heart.
The tension on both sides, hard to swallow.

Driving home after the game my sweetheart
suffered an attack, much worse shall we say,
than a mere gastrointestinal fart.
Gas stations, closed; fast food stops, gone astray.

No rhyme nor reason fits distension's distress;
My beloved sensed a connection, right off -
key to dad’s workplace suspended a big mess
as mom wonders, "Was it my rice pilaf?"

written February 9, 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dietrich Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 7:49 PM
oh my!! What a first date THAT was, Reason. Well done meeting the challenge.
Poteet Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 5:18 AM
He passed the parental “inspection” with flying colors. Thanks, Andrea.
Boddie Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 11:45 AM
being nervous can cause many problems....and sometimes its hard to solve them....but with poise and determination....you can conquer any situation....hilarious write....lol
Poteet Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 12:56 PM
Thanks you are right but being home with a problem is more comfortable
Pandit Avatar
February 9, 2018 at 10:55 AM
Oh, boy--that was some event! Well depicted..best for a win.
Poteet Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 12:55 PM
thanks a bunch appreciate your encouragement
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