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Distension's Tension

I can remember a February away back in nineteen seventy-four 'Twas a first meeting of my family and my intended whom I'd spoken for. Two hour ride to Kentucky's western part with a basketball game planned to follow home-cooked meal - key to a son-in-law's heart. The tension on both sides, hard to swallow. Driving home after the game my sweetheart suffered an attack, much worse shall we say, than a mere gastrointestinal fart. Gas stations, closed; fast food stops, gone astray. No rhyme nor reason fits distension's distress; My beloved sensed a connection, right off - key to dad’s workplace suspended a big mess as mom wonders, "Was it my rice pilaf?" written February 9, 2018

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Date: 2/10/2018 7:49:00 PM
oh my!! What a first date THAT was, Reason. Well done meeting the challenge.
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Date: 2/12/2018 5:18:00 AM
He passed the parental “inspection” with flying colors. Thanks, Andrea.
Date: 2/10/2018 11:45:00 AM
being nervous can cause many problems....and sometimes its hard to solve them....but with poise and determination....you can conquer any situation....hilarious write....lol
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Date: 2/10/2018 12:56:00 PM
Thanks you are right but being home with a problem is more comfortable
Date: 2/9/2018 10:55:00 AM
Oh, boy--that was some event! Well depicted..best for a win.
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Date: 2/10/2018 12:55:00 PM
thanks a bunch appreciate your encouragement

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