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Distant Tomorrows

She was the star in his velvet night The steady beat of love's drums How distant is that gleaming light Too far for love, tomorrow never comes She was the bloom that welcomed spring When the winter cold succumbs A fragrant rose with love to bring Would it be there when summer comes He found her there within his dreams With kisses sweet as sugar plums Lost again in an elusive scheme Would she be there when dawn comes Too far a dream for him to reach Too sad the song of dawn becomes Melodies with lessons to teach But the lyrics say, tomorrow never comes. -- 11-16-18 Tomorrow - Contest Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

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Date: 12/19/2018 8:02:00 AM
Joseph, your poem is truly beautiful, I loved it and feel it is a winner. well done and I like the music too ~
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Date: 12/12/2018 4:44:00 PM
Hi Joseph, These lyrics are romantic and well written. Congrats on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/2/2018 5:22:00 PM
Beautiful and romantic Joseph, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/1/2018 9:55:00 PM
I knew these words were a winner, the moment I read them. Because... Congratulations Joseph, on this win. ~ Brandy
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Date: 12/1/2018 2:24:00 PM
Hello Joseph, you have creted a a wonderful poem. I am happy to hear you entered the contest with this poem. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 12/1/2018 11:10:00 AM
I absolutely loved this, Joseph!:-) Congratulations on placing in my contest!
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Joseph May
Date: 12/1/2018 12:30:00 PM
Thank you for my placement Edward..
Date: 11/28/2018 5:52:00 PM
You are so very romantic, each word blossoms in my heart as I read this. Thank you for sharing and have a great day dear Joseph
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Date: 11/28/2018 9:55:00 AM
Joseph, a beautifully penned love poem, I LOVED it, well done and I like the music too ~
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Date: 11/27/2018 8:17:00 AM
Excellent, Joseph. Dreams of love...at it's best! Beautifully written with romance. I too have written about love in a dream (I Dreamt) but mine was a bit different than yours...lol Best wishes for a win my friend...
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Date: 11/26/2018 10:12:00 AM
Beautiful romantic lyrics. Nicely written. love phyl
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Date: 11/25/2018 5:13:00 PM
Beautiful poetry, love the theme, and the rhythmic flow..
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Date: 11/25/2018 3:27:00 PM
Sometimes the best romances are the ones that only happen in your dreams. Well Done Joseph. Beautifully written and well expressed. God Bless, JB
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Date: 11/24/2018 7:13:00 PM
so melancholy and so lovely. For me it's a Winner!!!
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Date: 11/22/2018 8:39:00 PM
Lovely lyric! =) I really enjoyed, reading it this evening. Have a wonderful rest of your Thanksgiving
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Date: 11/22/2018 5:58:00 PM
It is true, that tomorrow may never come, however- anything is possible in a dream. This is so beautiful and romantic. It sounds like she is his reason. A reason to believe, the reason to embrace a new day. ~ Brandy
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Date: 11/21/2018 8:08:00 AM
Very beautiful, Joseph:)
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Date: 11/20/2018 7:08:00 AM
This could be a song...Beautiful.
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Date: 11/19/2018 3:46:00 PM
Lovely write my friend...ready for a win...love the music too Joseph...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 11/19/2018 3:15:00 PM
the pensive mood of your tune moves me all the way till the end line, joseph... a fine read!..huggs
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Date: 11/18/2018 10:53:00 AM
What a sentimental poem about tomorrow, a great write for this contest.. I like the last stanza... Especially the last line...
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Date: 11/17/2018 2:47:00 PM
A lovely romantic scene painted with your words Joseph, in the sadness of unobtainable dreams. I loved it and hope it is a top winner in the contest! : ) xxoo
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Joseph May
Date: 11/17/2018 6:16:00 PM
thank you Connie
Date: 11/17/2018 11:45:00 AM
- Yesterday is past, tomorrow has not arrived yet ... a beautiful poem, Joseph :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Joseph May
Date: 11/17/2018 2:32:00 PM
Thank you Anne :)
Date: 11/17/2018 8:00:00 AM
I enjoyed the rhythm in your poem..and the romantic theme..lovely lines like: Too far for love, tomorrow never comes..and.. But the lyrics say, tomorrow never comes. You have my vote for a win, Joseph.
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Joseph May
Date: 11/17/2018 8:24:00 AM
Thank you Vijay
Date: 11/17/2018 7:20:00 AM
Wow, this is beautiful Joseph. I love it. A favorite :)
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Joseph May
Date: 11/17/2018 8:23:00 AM
Thank you for making it a favorite Heidi..Hugs
Date: 11/16/2018 11:40:00 PM
Joseph, beautifully penned, I love this well done write ~
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Joseph May
Date: 11/17/2018 6:15:00 AM
Thank you Dear Heart

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