Distant Shores

Come feel the pulsing, exotic 
sounds, reverberating upon 
those distant shores 
where loud voices wail
without restraint
shouting staccato cries 
with utter abandonment. 

How solemn are the pounding 
drums, with heavy hands beating 
haunting, hypnotic rhythms. 

A ceremonial crowd of mourners 
follow the well trodden pathway 
leading to makeshift sailboats 
made with sails of flour sacks 
sewn together, then tied
to wooden tree masts.

A dirge of death passes by
weighed down in its weary task
while a swath of fiery clouds
splash boldly across
a golden sunset, hovering 
over the Indian Ocean. 

See the light, cotton robes
wrapped loosely around the 
darkly tanned, young men
rippling gently in the breeze
as they carry the deceased
above and away, into the sea. 

A solemn ritual, a cultural divide
separated by a hemisphere 
of oceans and sky.



Written on 6/19/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Pettit Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 1:15 PM
You have described the scenery very well in this write. I have never been to the Indian Ocean area, but I now feel like I have been there after reading your work.
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 9:53 PM
I love that custom and it reminds me of ours here in Hawaii when we light our lanterns and float them out to sea by the thousands. It is a very emotional ceremony. You have expressed this Indian custom brilliantly in your lovely poem Laura. : )
Leiser Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 10:20 PM
Thank you, Connie. I enjoyed writing about something different than I normally write.
Juman Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 12:25 PM
beautifully written my friend
Leiser Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 12:29 PM
Thanks, Al. :)
Gentry Avatar
June 24, 2018 at 6:37 PM
Congratulations on your distant shores poem. I felt like I was right there - your imagery is spectacular.
Leiser Avatar
June 24, 2018 at 8:36 PM
Thank you, Susan! I hoped this poem would evoke an awareness of the different ways people live in foreign lands...
One Avatar
June 20, 2018 at 2:38 PM
Love that last stanza it is really profound... Great poem for the contest..
Leiser Avatar
June 20, 2018 at 5:05 PM
Hi Silent! Thank you for your encouraging comments! I haven’t written much of anything lately...was uninspired until this topic arose. Hope all is well with you :)
Onclaud Avatar
June 20, 2018 at 2:24 PM
how you entice, laura... poignantly beautiful!... huggs
Leiser Avatar
June 20, 2018 at 5:09 PM
Thank you, Nette, for your kind comments! Glad you liked this poem :)
Hamilton Avatar
June 20, 2018 at 8:58 AM
Wonderful write Laura, amazing imagery, I could visualize the whole scene!
Leiser Avatar
June 20, 2018 at 11:19 AM
Thank you, John. Yes, I was trying to paint a picture, and I have a picture of the boats described in my home...
Cunningham Avatar
June 19, 2018 at 11:53 PM
Beautiful but sad verse Laura, you gave us a colourful image, great write. Good luck. Tom.
Leiser Avatar
June 20, 2018 at 11:17 AM
Thank you, Tom. Yes, I penned this for the contest...with a different slant.
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