Distant Shore

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*Inspired by the photo I row along the shoreline of the quiet lake Meeting golden hues, with a breathe I take This day will never be repeated This view I see, from where I am seated Slow motion water ripples around me I move toward the colorful sky I see Love in the earth is painted all around With only nature's soft, flowing, sound I slowly head toward the distant shore Knowing right now, I need nothing more Heidi Sands 3/22/18

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Paul Callus

Date: 3/24/2018 5:23:00 PM

Very lovely, Heidi. There are times when an image appeals to and captivates our heart, and we just want it to last forever. Regards // paul

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/24/2018 5:38:00 PM

Thank you Paul. That's true, we want it to last forever :)

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 3/23/2018 12:23:00 PM

Monday I spent some hours with someone I love at "our lake." It's just the way you describe and with myriads of new ducklings. Thanks for the memory!

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/23/2018 12:25:00 PM

Oh, that sounds so nice Sunlite! I am happy you could identify with this and think about your memory there :) I appreciate your comment. Have a nice day.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/23/2018 9:21:00 AM

- A lovely description, Heidi :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/23/2018 11:11:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 3/23/2018 7:27:00 AM

A beautiful place and beautiful words to accompany it, Happy Friday xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/23/2018 7:41:00 AM

Thank you Mike. Happy Friday! :)

Artsieladie Sharon Donnelly

Date: 3/22/2018 8:41:00 PM

I had to wait for the picture to load but your words painted the beautiful picture before the picture loaded. Nicely written and I'm in agreement with, for I feel wrapped in peacefulness, when nature's all around, as there's no better soothing than by nature's sound. :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/23/2018 6:14:00 AM

Hi Sharon. Thank you for your kind comment :)