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Distant Dream

Howling into the moon princess faraway cutting deep blushing red her pale face shines Dressed within dark velvet shades of night falling Super heated your the candlelight tonight melting warm feelings softly glowing crawls beneath flesh heart flickers Shadows dance the tango silver lining footprints upon a dream Starlight of a thousand rainbows luster one treasure quest shines ore gift supreme Pot of gold draws inside a portrait carnation Honey coating chamber walls crowning your rose petals kissing breathless beyond gems we live and breathe the same air

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/11/2015 3:46:00 PM

a subtly passionate write which fascinate, liam... well done!.. huggs

Jan Allison

Date: 10/10/2015 6:07:00 PM

oh wow liam this is so so beautiful and romantic - such incredible imagery:-) hugs Jan xx

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 10/10/2015 5:16:00 PM

Hi Liam!A most beautiful,romantic,sweet, passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written!Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden pen.I love it!Another very beautiful,romantic,dreamy,enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.So very beautiful n' sweet!Just superb.Great!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Very wonderful imagery! Excellent!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + ++!A Fav! To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray that you're okay in everything.Always keeping you in my prayers,Liam.Keep your Faith!Keep your love n' hopes n' follow your dreams always too, Liam.Please take good care of yourself always.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/10/2015 3:29:00 PM

- Oh .... this is a lovely and romantic dream, Liam - All our dreams can come true if we have the courage to follow them :) - Enjoy your weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)