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Discord of Analogy, Michael Cheval, 2014

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the delight is in the disregard I'm here in this space but it's another world, a world away where creativity flows from my fingers and I sit with straight spine utterly absorbed not falling down but oh God no don't let that look land on me the mirrored world disappears that could be me if I lose focus get in harms way harm away, harm me did I offer an invitation? perhaps by lack of objection but I object by my fixed gaze I object by leaving you unacknowledged empathetic static erratic emphatic envelopes engulfs I have no protection from this yet if I fall you're crushed attraction and repulsion are part of the same stone even when broken in half

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Date: 2/29/2024 8:20:00 PM
I can see you dressed to the nines in an outfit a work of art in itself breezing through a gallery reciting your captivating descriptives in front of one baffling rendering after another enriching the process for onlookers as you guide them through the intangible .Bravo kid.
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Date: 2/29/2024 10:33:00 PM
Hurray! That's me Vickey :D I can completely imagine myself taking on this role right down to the way I'll majestically leap and perhaps wearing a jesters shoe as a nod to the absurd :) thank you for your fantastic comment x
Date: 2/29/2024 12:58:00 PM
Your interpretation really brings this one into the psyche, and gives real meaning to the impossible painting Dilly, so deep in thought the whole room takes on a different dimension and perspective, but you go further and explain the thought process and how it’s actually distorting reality; which in my mind touches on the quantum realm! Got to fave this one it’s profoundly brilliant
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Date: 2/29/2024 1:33:00 PM
You do make me smile David - thank you for such praise. I'm not sure I deserve it but I'll dance off with it any way :)
Date: 2/28/2024 8:55:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 2/29/2024 11:51:00 AM
Thank you Hilda, I'm quite pleased with this one x

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