Discipline Is True Horror

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my writing is called philosophical writing. i only uses middle ages words,words liked gracious,extravaganza,etc... this poem is about time traveling through space,pain,and horror. i don’t add capitalization’s on my writing.

true discipline is true horror true discipline is true pain of horror discipline is a true discipline of pain discipline is a true discipline of horror the truth of the truth is the horror of truth the truth of the truth is the horror of discipline a true horror is a true truth of truth pain is a truth of horror pain is a truth of discipline pain is a truth of true truth pain is earthly a pain pain is earthly a horror earthly is earthly a horror earthly is earthly a discipline the future is earthly the future the future is earthly a horror the future is earthly a discipline the future is earthly a universe of horror the future is earthly a universe of pain the future is earthly a universe of discipline earthly pain is earthly discipline

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Sand Blown

Date: 11/29/2018 5:10:00 PM

discipline can be a bitch...in high school the principal was an ex army colonel ...it bothered him naught to run a public school like a boot camp...it was a well behaved school i must say : )

Lucifer Very Very Very 1st
Date: 12/22/2018 2:32:00 PM

thank you for the time of day for your review,sand blown! sorry for the late reply. poet,lucifer very very very 1st