The moon was a little more towards the high point of the sky like if it was the sun it would be saying noonday and more clouds over the moon as well.
almost directly overhead crescent moon slips behind clouds.... crickets croon tunes gray clouds hide red sun rising rainstorm approaching soon adds apprehension
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The moon was a little more towards the high point of the sky like if it was the sun it would be saying noonday and more clouds over the moon as well.