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Diluted To Polluted

Christmas Day will never be the same Whilst companies who will only think gain It's charms now diluted Commercially polluted Frankly, the fat cats are solely to blame

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Iolanda Scripca

Date: 11/29/2010 6:03:00 PM

The fat cats AND the people who go for it...Congratulations for your well deserved win, dear James. All the best, iolanda and Repo Santa :)

Audrey Haick

Date: 11/29/2010 12:30:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's Contest, James! They'll never take the blame, James..it's always someone else's fault.. Love, audrey

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/29/2010 5:37:00 AM

Congratulations James on your win in the "Commercialized Holiday Humor" contest sponsored by Carolyn Devonshire. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson

Date: 11/28/2010 10:06:00 PM

No we share the blame for letting them get away with it. cCngratulations onwin. Love, Joyce

Tahera Mannan

Date: 11/28/2010 7:55:00 PM

I agree James. Many congratulations dear friend for this win.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 11/28/2010 4:54:00 PM

fat cat christmas haha good one, James

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/28/2010 4:44:00 PM

Hey, way to go, James. Congratlations. Glad to see this again and on the winner list. LUv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/28/2010 2:23:00 PM

Congratulations on the win for the excellent entry to the contest, James

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/28/2010 12:58:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Great term used "Fat Cats"..Sara

John Freeman

Date: 11/28/2010 11:48:00 AM

Diluted to Polluted. The truth can be no better exclaimed, James. " Congratulations" on a worthy poem's recognition. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/28/2010 7:24:00 AM

Indeed, companies are thinking about corporate gains, James! Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/21/2010 4:16:00 PM

Well, maybe not solely to blame. WE do buy into it; otherwise, it would not work.But they sure are slick little devils, aren't they? Good luck in Caroline's contest, I know you'll do well.

Wilma Neels

Date: 11/20/2010 11:51:00 AM

This is so true James, loved your witty limerick.. Hope you are having a relaxing ;) Wilma

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/19/2010 3:08:00 PM

So true my friend... It is sad we can't always see xmas as we did when we were kids...Michael

Audrey Haick

Date: 11/19/2010 2:51:00 PM

LOL.. A perfect entry for Carolyn's "Commercialized Humor Contest", James. The bottom line is always greed. With a little foresight maybe they'll remember that cliche, "You will reap what you sow". Love, Audrey

David Smalling

Date: 11/18/2010 8:15:00 AM

Then let us not fed them our scraps ... but grow the maggots for our own instead, James. Thanks for this, for poetry must have a social commentary pointing to a poet's conscience. One love

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 11/17/2010 1:46:00 PM

Hello James, Boy you hit home on this one, it is so much so here, so commercial! We try so hard every year to keep it real...Thank you for this As Always, Shar

Linda Milgate

Date: 11/16/2010 7:01:00 PM

Love it!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/16/2010 5:17:00 PM

:) Thanks for supporting the contest, James! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/16/2010 3:44:00 PM

Quite right the fat cats are wholly responsible , James. Good luck in the contest.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/16/2010 3:18:00 PM

Boy, this is a great one..shes going to love it. BG