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Different Coffee Moment

Lazing on the porch to trace a morning breeze Splash the clouds with hues, I reach For my coffee: kohl-like, brewed, grounded Sifted from Robusta beans: its aroma tingling With a different flavor—less bitter, more sweet Carrying me to the rise of dawn As the heated fog Entices my throat to sip the cream stirred By a riot of daffodils, grass--- The wet dew rolling on my bare feet . And I relish the cool Steam soothing a mild ceremony of rituals Without a door banging, a newspaper flapping by the table and mug… I close my eyes To hear the chirp of birdsong humming like Whistles on the coffee pot: and a world Passes by without me, absent from The noise of a long city week, renewed… Praising a god that makes Sunday misty. Contest: Brian's Choice N

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Date: 12/11/2016 10:21:00 PM
Hi Nette, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 12/11/2016 4:54:00 PM
Such lovely images. I like the riot of daffodils! Congrats, Nette, and thanks for entering my contest!
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Date: 12/9/2016 12:06:00 AM
Love the imagery here, you are so good at them, Nette:)
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Date: 12/7/2016 4:46:00 AM
Hi nette, reading you after ages, liked it much. hope all is well with u, hugs, Jag
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Date: 12/6/2016 10:52:00 PM
NOW THAT'S A CUPACOFFEE!!! Beautiful take on the theme Nette.
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Date: 12/6/2016 6:58:00 PM
I really loved that last line! If Tim Hortons ( the popular place here) read this, they'd pay you to do advertising for them here !!
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Date: 12/6/2016 5:50:00 PM
WoW! Nette, what a beautiful scene. You painted a lovely portrait with words. I found this write to be very poetic as well. Well done. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/6/2016 2:19:00 PM
- A beautiful moment ... enjoy it, Nette - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/6/2016 8:54:00 AM
Very beautiful and the best way to start the day. Nicely done Nette
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Date: 12/6/2016 8:21:00 AM
Sounds refreshing, nette. It is cold and rainy here, I could do with a bit of bird chirping and wet dew rolling on my feet. Good luck:)
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Date: 12/6/2016 6:16:00 AM
Flavored just right, love 'By a riot of daffodils'. :) Good luck Nette.
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Date: 12/6/2016 5:58:00 AM
felt 'renewed' ... such poems do renew you ... very nice ...
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Date: 12/6/2016 5:44:00 AM
Enticing title, evocative, interesting phrasing - "the wet dew rolling on my bare feet" - oh yes. ; ) Cheers, Nette.
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