Diabolus In Suburbia

We are drawn here for the festivity, to glorify His name. In our crimson best, presents wrapped gaily, to glorify His name. Joyous revelers and their dutiful handlers arriving. Doors open, we are welcomed heartily, to glorify His name. Presents not expected, but the mistress will not feel neglected. Material offerings stacked neatly, to glorify His name. The High Priestess, same outfit as daughter she wears, begins the Mass. Tailless donkey, fat clown smirks knowingly, to glorify His name. The sacrificial ham, its remains doused in mustard and served up In a Wonder Bread coffin festively, to glorify His name. Materialistic revelry, the presents torn asunder Young onlookers seethe deliriously, to glorify His Name. Priestess brings out decorated cake, pink frosting, five blazing flames Candles trace pentagram, implicitly, to glorify His name. Ice cream Bacchanaila, another unhinged Saturnalia Revelers sway intoxicatedly, to glorify His name. Sugar crash dysphoria, the merrymaking ends tearfully. Priestess signals the Mass’ ending quickly, to glorify His name. Thomas asks, with tremulous hesitation and no small dreading, Is Jimmy’s birthday party next Sunday, to glorify His name?
3/13/16 For the "Give me a Gazal" contest by Timothy Hicks
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Salehi Avatar
August 4, 2016 at 5:40 PM
Very nice....
Salehi Avatar
August 5, 2016 at 3:41 PM
You're very talented...
Quigley Avatar
August 4, 2016 at 7:25 PM
Thank you!
Raven Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 4:54 PM
Hi Tom, Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest....Vlad.
Daniel Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 1:53 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win:)
Quigley Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 6:52 AM
Thanks!
May Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 11:58 AM
Congrats on a great win Tom
Quigley Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 6:54 AM
Thank you!
Turner Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 11:28 AM
Congratulations Tom This is very funny. Peace my friend:)
Quigley Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 6:55 AM
Thanks, Daniel!
A   Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 9:32 AM
A well deserved number one ... Tom, congratulations on your top spot. Linda
Quigley Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 6:55 AM
Thanks, Linda!
Lane Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 9:31 AM
Your artistic veins were bulging in this exercise, Tom. Congratulations on a great win!
Quigley Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 6:55 AM
Thanks, Lin!
Allison Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 8:41 AM
Very well penned Tom a fabulous take on the theme:-) hugs Jan xx
Quigley Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 6:56 AM
Thanks, Jan!
Inman Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 8:00 AM
Tom, unique interpretation of the form. How strongly we hold to ritual in our lives.
Quigley Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 8:12 AM
thank you, James!
Davey Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 1:50 AM
Congratulations on your very impressive win and well deserved
Quigley Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 8:12 AM
Thanks, Brian!
Hicks Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 11:42 PM
Congrats on your First Place Win, Tom! Christmas has a rather dark history, with pentagrams, Saturnalia etc., you wrote this in a very intriguing fashion, and with your surprise couplet at the end, made it darkly amusing. Little Tommy has no clue what's going on. Also loved your "Wonder Bread coffin"... not many attempted writing a ghazal that exceeded 5 couplets, so extra props for you there. Brilliant and totally unique subject matter.
Quigley Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 8:12 AM
Thanks, Timothy! Pleasant surprise!!
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