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Devotion Hell emptied its belly, dropped lava from the sky, where once stood a compound in a remote village. Then there were only ruins. Barking and sniffing rubble for familiar scents; he emerged limping from the dense cloud of dust. Something in there, he sensed, in that strange mixture of smells, which bound him to the scene. He would not break the shackles. Minutes turned into hours, hours into days. His friend and his master wasn’t there to fill the bowl. Small puddle, next to house also went dry. Hunger pains slowed him down, but he sniffed and he dug, till his paws had no pads and his bark waned to whimper. Had no strength to prop his head. Ears hung flaccid. Curled up in the rubble, head resting between legs. Panting ceased, breathing slowed–then stopped. But the eyes remained open, waiting for his master.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 2/11/2021 3:31:00 PM
A pleasure to find your poignant poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology, Amanullah~
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Amanullah Khan
Date: 9/23/2021 6:57:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 5/27/2020 6:37:00 AM
Dogs tend to get a bad name in some cultures. Nice to see a positive one.
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Date: 5/26/2020 8:22:00 PM
VERY TOUCHING,PULLS AT THE HEART LIKE A TANGLED VINE TRYING TO FIND ESCAPE...I LIKE IT
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Amanullah Khan
Date: 9/23/2021 6:58:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comment!
Date: 5/26/2020 10:59:00 AM
Welcome back, Amanullah. This is a heartbreaking poem. I am an animal lover...big time. Sincerely ~ Elaine
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Amanullah Khan
Date: 9/23/2021 6:59:00 PM
Thank you for your nice comment!
Date: 5/26/2020 7:01:00 AM
It's good to have you back. I also have a piece about Thomas Jefferson you might appreciate. In the spirit of not letting old dogs die.
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Amanullah Khan
Date: 9/23/2021 7:02:00 PM
Thanks! Can I have access to your piece!

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