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Devils' Holiday "horror Vs Supremacy"

Rays beam, the room brightens instantly. You stand there as you do every morning, ritually yawning, stretching... Everything seems fine but you feel different, more aggressive, confident, fluorescent. No work today, you feel the urge to explore your first day, amongst the cattle you prey. YOUR whipped around mightily, shoved, in--dented into the concrete. A man approaches in a dark suit with a blood red tie. He tells you that you'd been bitten for numbers, a select group for supremacy. You are a hybrid vampire, he tells you. You can survive the sun! There is one rule, to only feast in the shadow of the moon... To be continued......... 7/09

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Date: 8/27/2009 12:42:00 PM
Great story to follow Jared>>James
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Date: 7/25/2009 11:56:00 AM
Thank Moses for all your kind words on my style... It is always a pleasure to read the comments I receive from you among many other poets......But, you missed part one.... The Horror Show... The poem means more after reading the first.......Again thank you Moses.......:JP)
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Date: 7/25/2009 11:34:00 AM
Very well put together here, I see a metaphor, developing here, and I'll stop there, and wait on the conclusion, to see if Iam right about what it is. Good write, Moses
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Date: 7/23/2009 8:24:00 AM
I wondered if it was vampire or were-animal I guess it is both? But what is the other part other than vampire? I will have to keep reading. Great imagination and wonderfully written. I anxiously await part 3....Aleera
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