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Devil Lover, Devil Judge (Sonnet)

O beauty, under whose spell this man be intoxicated by her love affair as every night she wraps, seductively, in whispers! Swirling whispers in the air. With pride of life, with lust of flesh and eyes, her stratagem promotes wicked appeal like sinfully delicious chocolate lies my palette wets to make a business deal. Then, somehow, with her charismatic charm this brightest angel fallen from beyond can have a man to trade his best for harm and, in this cosmic game of chess, be pawned, at whence the spell she lifts, plays magistrate. So wrongly does she toy with this man's fate.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/9/2010 7:34:00 PM
Great sonnet writing, Chad. IN fact, one of the few I am reading that is using a true tradiional sonnet form! Congrats on your win. Andrea
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Date: 11/9/2010 6:40:00 PM
Thank you all :)
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Date: 11/9/2010 2:48:00 PM
Super Sonnet Chad, many congratulations on your win in Thvia's fine contest with this gem >> James
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Date: 11/9/2010 10:23:00 AM
Cool job puting this one together, Chad. Congratulations on your win. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/9/2010 5:03:00 AM
Congrats Chad on your super win in the devil made me do it contest with this brilliant write and entry ... enjoy a big win today with lots of luv..
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Date: 11/8/2010 7:08:00 PM
This is a truly beautifully written sonnet which I would have rated at the top for its perfect form. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/26/2010 11:48:00 PM
Very expressive!
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Date: 10/26/2010 1:18:00 PM
Wonderful Sonnet written just in time for Holloween, Chad...Enjoyed reading it. ...Always, Audrey
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