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Mazatlan, Mexico 11:07 PT! Gone! Diamond Ring!
Eaglepass, Texas! 1:40PM CT! Gone! Diamong Ring!
Poteau, Oklahoma 1:45 PM! Gone! Diamond Ring!
Bloomington, IN 2:04 PM! Gone! Diamond Ring!
Rocky River, OH 2:13PM! Gone! Diamond Ring!
Niagara Falls, NY totality 3:26PM ET! Gone! Diamond Ring!
Lancaster, New Hampshire 3:27PM! Gone! Diamond Ring!
Houlton, Maine 3:32PM ET! Gone! Diamond Ring!
Canada!

^{The 1919 eclipse confirmed}^{Eienstein's theory that curvature space time}^{describing it not as a force but as a curvature of space}^{"Theory of Relativity"}

Comet 12P/Pons-Brooks (Devils Comet)

April showers may dampen Dallas Texas torrents glooming deluge on path way Priceless zooming presence; shrouds blend violets and daisies blooming in May Rain forecast an encumbered view; stubborn clouds cause distressing delay Isn’t raining rain you know, it’s raining diamonds vrooming diamond souffle Look expectantly skyward, your Ray Bans don, for the Solar Eclipse it's today!

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 5/6/2024 11:46:00 AM

Anaya, my adult children and my wife and I traveled to Canada to see the total eclipse. I've seen two others and it's interesting to compare the view in each. The 1970 in the Carolinas and 2017 in Tennessee. The prominences were spectacular this time and there is a strange interference phenomenon known as shadow bands which occur just before and after totality. 1970 seemed the most spectacular for those. Hard to believe April has passed us by.

I Am Anaya
Date: 6/5/2024 7:47:00 PM

Wow! Duke that is awesome! I could just imagine. I'm so glad that you, our super poet here had taken that opportunity. Smart you are, my friend!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/25/2024 12:36:00 PM

This is delightful. I sure wish I could view one of those solar eclipses!!

I Am Anaya
Date: 4/25/2024 4:05:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea~!

Christina Bowring

Date: 4/24/2024 11:29:00 PM

Dear Anaya, I love how you have written this so beautifully, majestic and visually stunning. ‘Shrouds blend violets and daisies’ ‘ it’s raining diamonds. Such a wonderful sight to behold. You have captured it so poetically enticingly. Wished I had the chance to see it. Always fascinates me. Love all your pictures too to mark the special occurrence. Thank you for sharing it for those especially that didn’t see it :( Hugs to you for a wonderful day xx

I Am Anaya
Date: 4/25/2024 4:05:00 PM

Thank you, Christina! It was my April calendar as well, hence the daisies and violets (flower of the month) birthstone (diamond of the month). ~xo

Valsa George

Date: 4/17/2024 6:43:00 AM

"it’s raining diamonds vrooming diamond souffle".... Lovely description, dear Anaya. In your part of the country, I am sure it must have been a spectacular sight. Your acrostic has highlighted one of the great astral phenomenon of the month of April. We watched it on the TV. Have a great week ahead, dear Anaya.

I Am Anaya
Date: 4/18/2024 7:24:00 PM

Thank you, Valsa! All my best~hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/14/2024 10:06:00 AM

What a creative Acrostic write. Love It & all the wonderful pictures... Looks like we all lived through it. It Was A Crazy Day..... Have a very blessed day/week writing away..........

I Am Anaya
Date: 4/16/2024 9:45:00 AM

Thank you, Paula!

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/10/2024 5:04:00 PM

Dear Anaya, such a creative acrostic about an eclipse. This acrostic is truly impressive. The lines "Look expectantly skyward, your Ray Bans don, for the Solar Eclipse it's today!" are particularly captivating.

I Am Anaya
Date: 4/10/2024 7:14:00 PM

Thank you, it was quite the event!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/10/2024 3:25:00 AM

It important to wear proper glasses when viewing solar eclipse. Loved your poem.

I Am Anaya
Date: 4/10/2024 9:18:00 AM

Very important, Victor. Thank you!

David Kavanagh

Date: 4/8/2024 1:00:00 PM

Beautiful presentation and poem Anaya, it’s great to see so many poets marking the day, I’ve been glued to the Tv and watched a live feed from Dealey plaza in Dallas were JFK was assassinated, the sky did clear, and it looked so emotionally uplifting, love the isn’t raining line, mostly because it’s hammering down here lol! cheers David

I Am Anaya
Date: 4/8/2024 1:59:00 PM

OK, I'll look into the Einstein's dark energy, I'm, keeping up on it! Fresh poetry & science always welcome!

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/8/2024 1:50:00 PM

The Calendar flower girl really is like Anais, I’m sure she’ll be delighted with that, you best tell her, well done

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/8/2024 1:43:00 PM

Ha it’s really difficult to get one’s mind around space/time curvature, the math is totally bonkers, I find it’s best to imagine it in the abstract, and it makes a lot more sense, try dark energy next, Einstein may have predicted it with his steady state theory, but then abandoned it, but turns out he was definitely on to something,!

I Am Anaya
Date: 4/8/2024 1:23:00 PM

Hey, I just learned that Einstein's theory that curvature space time describing it not as a force but as a curvature of space...some Science!--1919's Eclipse proved it!

I Am Anaya
Date: 4/8/2024 1:18:00 PM

It was a clear day in Texas, they were lucky. I'm keeping the rain effects otherwise no poem, I must of been channeling your neck of the woods! JFK-perfect place to be, spiritual deep! Hey clouds cause silver linings, another sight to see! My neighb, Vargas a young professor at our local college and I stepped out, he had all the goods, eclipse paraphernalia. I thought of 'Anais' for the flower girl calendar. A huge thanks for stopping by, but I think its in Canada now, I'm continuing my documenting!Cheers :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/8/2024 12:04:00 PM

- A great poem on an exciting day ... we can't see it here in Norway ... hope you get to see it, Anaya :) - hugs

I Am Anaya
Date: 4/8/2024 12:18:00 PM

Anne-Lise, wow, I'm watching the entire day on MSNBC while documenting. We stepped outside and what we see in California is 50% super bright! What they see along the path is total darkness, looks like night! Very spiritual for everyone. Thanks for the kind comment, glad you enjoyed!

Ink Empress

Date: 4/8/2024 11:50:00 AM

Dear anaya, it is today right the eclipse for you? Did you see it? I love the eclipse poems altho ofcourse i dont get it experience it here , but im inspired to write one too! I love this acrostic. Especially love the lines “ Isn’t raining rain you know, it’s raining diamonds vrooming diamond souffle “ wow diamond souffle thats new and unique word pairing! I wish i had come up with that. Cant wait to hear your experience with solar eclipse. Stay safe. Sending you light always

I Am Anaya
Date: 4/8/2024 12:03:00 PM

Ink, I'm here, I step out with the neigh's every once in a while, to look through the eclipse glasses only 50% here, but we see it! Celebrating, what makes it spiritual, Empress it brings us all together, a reverential aurora! I make up words a lot, so beware, LOL! Souffle came to mind because it is an acrostic but also a monorhyne hence souffle. Watch it on the news it's incredible! Hugs & light to You ~Anaya

I Am Anaya

Date: 4/8/2024 11:33:00 AM

Neighbors & I we're stepping outside! ...It felt reverent!