Determined Summer

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Written September 5, 2023
For The Contest, “Etheree”
Sponsor, Ink Empress
Syllables: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10

The sun, so warm today- last two as well after the rain storms cooled off hot humid days. It seemed the Fall had arrived; switched off the air, put on the heat. But Summer, smiling said, “No, not yet! Autumn stay away- my time here's not done!”

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/12/2023 8:10:00 AM

Vivid imagery Sandra. Congratulations! :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/11/2023 10:46:00 AM

Congratulations!

Ink Empress

Date: 10/11/2023 10:30:00 AM

Cute and fun etheree! Loved the uniqueness of your take; and that picture goes well with this, thank you for writing, congratulations on winning,