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I sat outside on my deck and looked out to the clear view of the sky. In the few minutes I was outside, I noticed the sky, but I never truly observed it. From the shades of azure, yellow and oranges plastered everywhere, came suddenly wash of grey and dark blues. But, how did I not see the transition of sky? I came to realize that, as humans we only notice the large or perhaps the large changes in one another. If we stop, and pause to ponder for a moment, bothering to notice the minuscule ones; the ones that just pass so fast by our eyes, as if they were never there. For example, the colours in the sky at first glance I looked and saw a melange of different shades of blues and reds. The moment I looked away, even for a mere second, the sky right under my eyes had become something utterly different. We never do realize these little things in one another, as a consequence in the end they are most prevalent and also we yearn for the most. We come to terms that these small things are what make life; the things that we so often lose.

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Date: 7/17/2014 10:19:00 PM
Very lovely n colourful Maryann ! a merited big win,,huge congrats!
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Date: 7/17/2014 8:54:00 AM
Congrats on your win!!
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Date: 7/17/2014 6:58:00 AM
Great win..Congrats :)
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Date: 7/16/2014 9:00:00 PM
Congrats on a great win, Mary Ann.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 7/16/2014 5:55:00 PM
Mary Ann, Congratulations! Thank you for enjoying my contest, stop by my latest blog "Tanka you, but no tanka you :)" If you'd like, or have time! No Matter, enjoy your win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/7/2014 7:52:00 PM
Mary Ann,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 7/2/2014 2:41:00 AM
Hi MaryAnn, congratulations on a great write - I really enjoyed reading this poem! Well done!
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Date: 6/27/2014 6:12:00 PM
Welcome to poetry soup, Maryann. I hope you will find many friends here among those who love to write poetry. Everyone has always been most kind to me. If you comment on other's poems, many will return the favor.
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Date: 6/27/2014 10:15:00 AM
i like your line "notice the large or perhaps the large changes in one another." self involve make the event and not the process our point of reference... thk for sharing
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Date: 6/25/2014 11:50:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Mary Ann :) - I choose your first well written poem - Well done - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/25/2014 10:34:00 AM
Thank you for sharing :)
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Date: 6/24/2014 9:28:00 PM
MaryAnn, wow, a clever thought,,,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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