Destiny and Eternity

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It's a little strained what a place or shift of time can weave a true change If for the better or worse yet, time may be a disaster

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Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 12/6/2021 7:54:00 AM

This is true you never know what may be around the corner...Delice

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/5/2021 7:24:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this one. Time can definitely change all things but doesn't necessarily change all things. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara

Judy Ball

Date: 12/4/2021 2:59:00 PM

Time is only your friend if you let The Word be your guide. A lovely read and love the pic. God Bless, JB

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/4/2021 11:28:00 AM

Nice tanka. I loved the flowers you showed with it.

David Kavanagh

Date: 12/4/2021 9:50:00 AM

I know Lasaad, on the face of it my writes don’t give much time to optimism on the grand scale, I agree time may be a disaster, but only in the realistic not pessimistic sense, we must live for the moment as the future is, and always will be uncertain, this is just the humble opinion of an agnostic, cheers David

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/4/2021 7:04:00 AM

Do your best--rest will follow. Time is so elusive. Well said, Lasaad.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/4/2021 2:56:00 AM

Profound writing, my friend, Lasaad. The best is to accept our destiny otherwise we are bound to suffer! Blessings.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/4/2021 2:00:00 AM

A SAD POEM REALLY. YOU SHOULD BE OPTIMISTIC.