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Destiny

a child plays alone watching from behind a tree the predator smiles

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/13/2018 9:27:00 PM
O Andrea, so creepy. Powerful message. Watch your kids, folks!!
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Date: 5/16/2015 11:47:00 AM
enjoying this one ever more. not a good smile... filth
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Date: 5/12/2015 12:54:00 PM
THAT IS SAD...SKAT
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Date: 10/18/2014 7:27:00 PM
True and sad. Great haiku!
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Date: 10/18/2014 7:19:00 PM
First a bird joke. I love hummingbirds. So here goes... Q: Why do hummingbirds hum? A: Because they don’t know the words.
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Date: 9/10/2014 9:12:00 PM
A not so nice image on this one. love phyl
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Date: 7/3/2014 5:46:00 AM
A very terrifying imagery! I feel like saving the child!!!...... Applause to you Andrea!!!! ^_^
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Date: 7/2/2014 10:24:00 AM
A splendid haiku... Congrats, Andrea. You really deserve it!
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Date: 7/1/2014 5:59:00 PM
creepy and unique, but worthy of a win! adds variety to the contest. happy hugs ;)
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Date: 7/1/2014 11:45:00 AM
Congratz for the win! You deserve it! Wishing you all the Best always! - Doris
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Date: 7/1/2014 3:05:00 AM
I saw this one before... gave me the creeps.. now again. Awesome win CONGRATS with this really creepy one(still after a xth read) Dutch greetings Elly
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Date: 7/1/2014 1:46:00 AM
A nice picture created with images, Andrea, Congrats on the win
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Date: 6/30/2014 9:45:00 PM
Not a pretty destiny but a very good Haiku Nice going and congrats
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Date: 6/30/2014 7:03:00 PM
Yikes! Congrats on this unique piece. Bg
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Date: 6/30/2014 4:18:00 PM
Congrats, Andrea!. Happy to see this creepy hiaku as a great win!!.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 6/30/2014 4:08:00 PM
Hi Andrea, I extend a huge congratulations to you, my friend for your TOP win which you so richly deserve! Warmest regards. Pandita
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Date: 6/30/2014 2:59:00 PM
congratulation Andrea, a little dark
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Date: 6/30/2014 2:58:00 PM
Whoa, Nellie! Who knows what evil lurks in the heart of men... Scary, Andrea.
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Date: 6/30/2014 2:41:00 PM
Brrr... what a creepy little haiku this is; so few words, but such a chilling image. Very well-written (I'd expect nothing less from you), but so different from your usual fare. Congrats on a well-deserved win.
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Date: 6/30/2014 10:41:00 AM
Congratulations my dear friend, Andrea for an awesome haiku with a theme and title, “destiny”. Thanks a lot for your loving support. Big Hugs! Love lots, Leonora
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Date: 6/19/2014 3:10:00 PM
You scared the hell out of me Andrea, I read this at night....I will add my comment in the morning
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Date: 6/15/2014 8:56:00 AM
enjoyed reading this scary one again - it still made me shudder
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Date: 6/14/2014 12:10:00 PM
This kind of freaked me out, mainly because I wasn't expecting that based from your title-- blast those child predators! Very twist-ed but also I liked the effect, kind of being really getting caught of guard with this write-- ok, have to go now, just me saying hi and sending hugs sweetie!
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Date: 6/13/2014 11:28:00 PM
in a white van right? I think I saw this guy down at the park the other day with a hatched and some jolly ranchers! :)
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Date: 6/12/2014 7:40:00 AM
Wow! Scary. Reading this feels like one is watching as something evil unfolds and being unable to move and stop it.
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