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Destiny (Double Tanka)

My humanity Sees reflection in water As the ice now thaws Watch it run like a river As death casts shadow on me New life in the spring? No, this cannot be for me As I’ve chosen route Where once was life, now bares death Now, where’s death, you will find me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/25/2009 11:57:00 PM
Good write my dear Michael. You know, this could almost pertain to the executioner in your other write because of the last two lines...actually, all of it could pertain to him.
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