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Destination, Midnight

Destination midnight, a new year, and time to close. I feel sick and don't want to be here, what a holiday, again, alone. Eleven thirty, really, it was eleven twenty five, like a half an hour ago. Busy, A worker bee drone, struggling to find his way home. Finally, I'm free, sober and walking home. I spot my boy in his black Jeep Liberty, drunk driving. Swerving all over the road. "YO" he yells, with an intoxicated tone. So, I drove the half mile to my lake side abode. My room-mates had an itch, For a New Year kiss, unwilling to miss this drunken colliegate mix. I too needed a fix!!! Capa Alpha Zeta, Beer pong & Crunk dance. Drunken conversations loom, young adults yearn, seeding thier late night romance. To be Continued..... "Destination, Jeep" Jared Pickett 1/2/10 Asavvy1

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Date: 2/22/2010 7:44:00 AM
really humorous and life learning. Keep writing as I'm reading your other poems
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Date: 1/12/2010 7:49:00 PM
Going to finish this one soon? "Sweetie"
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Date: 1/9/2010 4:46:00 PM
New Years Night and next day feeling not so right. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 1/9/2010 2:41:00 PM
So Good ! ... This One Read Like Prime-Time TV ... Oh The Touchstones and Milestones In Our Lives of Special Occasions ... I Could see all the action for that night (smile) ... What Happening Next? ... MoonBee
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Date: 1/9/2010 8:25:00 AM
Sounds like you had an interesting New Year's experience, Jared. I was looking for part two in "Destination Jeep" but couldn't find it. Enjoy those college days while you can, but don't drink and drive because we'd hate to lose you. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/8/2010 12:51:00 PM
great piece Jared...TAH
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Date: 1/8/2010 11:59:00 AM
Wow! I don't know how I missed this Jared...Very nice...Enjoyed... Marty
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Date: 1/2/2010 2:16:00 PM
I am diggin' the structure. Excellent work Jared...Raul
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Date: 1/2/2010 12:06:00 PM
So far so good.. curious as to if real or not describing your Eve...what happened to the "lady love"? ...I partied hearty in my home with friends and lovers alike and they all wanted to drive to Manhattan to watch the ball drop but TV was good enough for me as too many tequilas had me ultra mellow..so whats up Lone Wolf? no communication makes me wonder? lost interest in our co write?... never answered Soup Mail.. what gives guy?.. here 4 U .. lots of luv in 2010 and creativeness.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 1/2/2010 10:32:00 AM
Very creative write. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 1/2/2010 9:58:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this Destination Midnight Path..your verses always my pleasure..Charma
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