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Destination, Salt Lake City

Arrived, in Palm Springs Mid July, tourist season in this region. Another gold mine. We all gather our product, business to conduct. Seperate, Alone this time DAMN, did you see her? she's fine! That's a crime she's mine..... I approach my sales swag in full swing. confident, cool, collected. just made fifty bucks, three more customers. I approach, No luck!! Marriot, Palm Springs. Perfume sales bizzar, thousands of young men, beautiful women from around the globe probe, sell, stroll paradise streets. all with demands to meet. The company threw a party in Marriot. Half the building owned by staggering, half naked young adults. three women to one man ratio understand, the many chances. I had.. Partied all night only to drive the next day. headed back to Las Vegas for an overnight stay. Work but mostly played with all the money that I made. Bummer, I lost two hundred dollars What a pity gather up now everybody, for our final Destination, Salt Lake City. Stay tuned for the conclusion...... Destination, Bed....... Jared Pickett..8/2/09........:JP}

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Date: 1/25/2010 7:38:00 AM
Hey Jared, Did you get you get to see The Mormon Tabernacle Choir? You do get around... I haven't found your recommended poem yet... But I am having fun perusing some other works. Thanks for reading and commenting on my poetry. I always enjoy your commenting visits. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 8/27/2009 12:44:00 PM
Kool journey Jared, next chapter>>James
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Date: 8/3/2009 1:00:00 PM
LOL................Light & Love
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Date: 8/2/2009 3:57:00 PM
Jared, Better luck in Salt Lake. I live 40 miles from SLC and go there as seldom as possible. Be advised, it's not a party town. Enjoyed your poem. Nice work. Always, Will
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Date: 8/2/2009 2:33:00 PM
Interesting writing. Sara
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