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Destination, Naples

Destination, Tampa a college party we arrive Finally!! Carrying Coors Light 30 pack cans already, my mind is far from right USF a theme party throwback middle school dance I'm focused WOW standing in front of me "hey" "I really like those pants." having to remember what i wore in eighth grade came with such difficulty i wore something home made A knitted pullover vest black over a Fruit Of the Loom white tee white gold, rested on my chest and Ralph Lauren blue jeans beer pong, card games bikinis galore pink, white thongs crazy insane what was in store staggeringly Drunk, half naked colligiates dancing with intoxicated grace inhibitions not tonight I stayed all through the night danced with many females Alright my next destination, Naples i must leave at first light While living in Florida i ventured to beaches, resorts, college dorm parties, and all out mayhem.. this is just one of many tales....... This was definitely a VIVA Vacation....

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Date: 7/21/2009 2:51:00 PM
You sound a little like myself,a,,,,,,,few years ago. Iam not the same persona I was then, now! But live and learn Hu! You poem has some very good twists and turns, nice read! Boy! you've been all over my site. I don't know where to start in answering your comments. Catch you on the nest poem, Moses
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Date: 7/17/2009 1:16:00 PM
Kool write Jared, i like what your bringing to the Soup, Koolio write>>James
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Date: 7/17/2009 6:52:00 AM
adventorous poet,quite adventorous write,well penned--charma
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Date: 7/13/2009 8:12:00 AM
It was this adventure just reading it. Following the story with my eyes... enjoyed and have a great day.
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Date: 7/12/2009 9:01:00 PM
Nice experience and great structure...Raul
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