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Destination, Bed

Destination, Salt Lake City What a pity! To much fun, in the slums of southern California. We didn't want to leave This fornicating reprieve. Drugs, gambling, tons of money, all cash. A surprising weekend, pocketing seventeen hundred dollars. But, a lack of sleep has weakened, four sleepy hustlin' road scholars. Destination, Salt Lake City We're cruisin' I-15, intersecting I-215 the belt route. Downtown, Temple owned by the Mormons, I'm the man, incredible! A newly wealthy poetic foreman. Home at last! Still a bit intoxicated, alcohol is two days fermented, leaving me sluggish, foggy conditions in my head. Now home in Salt Lake City My next destination, Bed!!!!!! Concluding my Destination series....... Jared Pickett 9/7/09 Asavvy1

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Date: 10/11/2009 2:07:00 PM
Love the story! Excellent write!
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Date: 9/19/2009 6:53:00 AM
Kool road trip you have taken us on Jared>>James
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Date: 9/10/2009 3:27:00 PM
Loved the trip, thanks friends Cody
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Date: 9/8/2009 4:24:00 AM
Jared, thank you for taking us along on your trip. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/7/2009 3:58:00 PM
Sounds like a trip Jared, I've driven thoes highways you mention, Congrats. on winnings. Sincerely Moses
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Date: 9/7/2009 12:04:00 PM
Interesting put me to thinking on this one. Sara
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Date: 9/7/2009 10:55:00 AM
Nice structure, wonderful writing...Raul
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