Despair

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can you yield my ashes so i can burn them by the hell of last days

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Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/1/2021 7:36:00 AM

Powerful and ominous writing, my friend, Lasaad. Well written! Blessings

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/31/2021 8:32:00 AM

Occasionally we suffer, but trust in God for He can help.

David Kavanagh

Date: 8/30/2021 3:01:00 PM

Despairing deep Lasaad, and the very concept of just wanting some ashes to burn, rather than nothing at all, is as bad as it gets, incredible monoku, cheers David

Mohamed Omar

Date: 8/30/2021 9:41:00 AM

wise

L Milton Hankins

Date: 8/30/2021 9:15:00 AM

Very interesting line, Lasaad. I think I might say the same thing under the circumstances.