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Despair-Cheer

Despair Reflections in the mirror a ravaged look of despair abandoned dreams of goodness nothing waits for you Cheer Some looks that appear broken soon can be mended in time dream on for it will happen Despair will be cheer Dodoitsu Doppelgänger Contest Sponsored by Alfred Vasallo Ralph Sergi November 15, 2015

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Date: 12/9/2015 11:56:00 PM
Beautiful, although it seems in my case the verses should be revered! :) great write.
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 12/13/2015 1:35:00 PM
Thank you, Arthur.
Date: 11/19/2015 5:25:00 PM
Nicely done, Ralph!
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 12/13/2015 1:36:00 PM
Hi Andrea: Thank you for your comment.
Date: 11/16/2015 11:55:00 AM
introspective, ralph... greeat job!..huggs
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Date: 11/16/2015 11:54:00 AM
Mahalo, Connie: I guess you can call it a step above haiku. I use it a lot.
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Date: 11/16/2015 10:13:00 AM
A wonderful entry for the contest Ralph. I don't remember ever trying this form before. Best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 11/15/2015 11:15:00 PM
Hi SO: Thank you for your comment.
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Date: 11/15/2015 1:33:00 PM
- A little sad poem, Ralph - Well written - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 11/15/2015 11:17:00 PM
Hi Anne Lise : Thank you and un abrazo fuerte.

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