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When my heart
was no longer content in solitude;

I asked;

"Oh my lonely heart, 
what is it that you desire?"

Softly it whispered

for her heart beats to ease your breathless sighs, so softness of her voice soothes suppressed sorrows - silent secrets still shield.
For, your hearts have no tolerance of time. In the reality of my reverie, my soul drifts to a place, 1000 miles away. In a night without sound, under a blanket of gazing stars. Rest your head upon my heart listen to it beat your name. Massage it with devotion let us lay for eternity. As embers touch the night sky. Under the modesty of moonlight, I shall remove your veil of timidness. With the tenderness of our hands, dance to the magnetism of nature. Tones of our eyes reflect like fireflies illuminating in perfect symphony. Tongue's lyrics will remain silent. Craving for those kiss less lips if we close our eyes it is not a sin. We will flow like rivers running to the sea, floating on waves of passion, illustrating a lushness of love, deeper than the Pacific ocean you are the canvas and I, the strokes of your brush As the innocence of night is lost, we merge like dusk to dawn. Yet daylight does not disappoint open your eyes my love, I am here. Once we were homeless, now we live in each other's heart. Simple sensual musing Silent One 23 November 2019

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Date: 12/25/2019 11:03:00 AM
Wow! I have always wanted to do an alliteration Nicely done.
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Silent One
Date: 12/25/2019 11:05:00 AM
Thanks, alliteration is my fave poetic technique... all my poems have alliteration... appreciate the visit brother..
Date: 12/19/2019 1:13:00 PM
Belated congrats on your potd, this is a special write, sensuous musings indeed. An alliteration explosion on display, this has to be saved and savoured! An easy fave of mine!
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Date: 12/9/2019 5:09:00 AM
That is a master piece. Kai
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Date: 12/8/2019 8:24:00 PM
The aural of the poem is priceless, congratulations on your POTD Silent One.
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Date: 12/6/2019 12:00:00 AM
well! your simple musings were always my faves but now that you've added sensual..magnifique! :)
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Date: 12/5/2019 9:44:00 PM
It seems i'm so far behind the other comments,,yet the echo, of sentiment still lingers, when i read such beautiful poetry.
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Date: 12/5/2019 5:45:00 AM
Seriously sensuous. "You are the canvas and I, the strokes of your brush" - BRAVO!
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Date: 12/5/2019 4:03:00 AM
Beautiful fluidity of romantic ink has never been coveted so well before. Breathless....Kelli
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Date: 12/3/2019 11:08:00 AM
This was incredible... .... .... .... reading again... ... ... enjoying... ... ... wow.... ... excellence... Ann
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Date: 12/1/2019 8:09:00 PM
Perfection!
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Date: 12/1/2019 11:28:00 AM
What a tender poem, Silent, it flows gently like a calm streamlet! :))
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Date: 11/29/2019 4:26:00 PM
I read this before, but I think I forgot to comment. This is very sensual and romantic, Silent One. "If we close our eyes it is not a sin"? I'll have to remember that.
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Date: 11/29/2019 8:22:00 AM
Hi Silent, belated congratulations on your poem of the day, with this amazing write. You make the free verse form sing, always using it to its complete potential. You know how to touch the soul with your work my friend. I love the content of this work. The words captivate, painting such vivid pictures. Have a wonderful Friday. Your friend always....Mike. A Fave
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Date: 11/27/2019 8:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD. Great poem & picture.......
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Date: 11/27/2019 7:53:00 AM
Lovely poem, SO. Spectacular form. Congrats on your well deserved POTD.
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Date: 11/25/2019 11:43:00 PM
Breathtakingly beautiful...you have such a unique way of captivating your readers...once I get to the end of your pieces I wish there were more to keep reading and it's hard not to read them over again :) Reminded me a bit of a poem I wrote awhile back called homeless strangers but their were no happy endings in mine.. Also congrats on POTD
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Silent One
Date: 11/26/2019 12:55:00 PM
Thank you Melissa, will check out that poem..
Date: 11/25/2019 8:44:00 AM
A poetic tour de force, SO!! Sensual imagery radiates w/effervescent ink brilliance. Kudos on POTD. Supernova bright write! Love and more love always. Romantic Warrior
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Date: 11/25/2019 5:48:00 AM
Ha ha, I was about to write that this should be POTD and when I read some of the comments I see that it is. Congrats! Also the video is perfect to accompany the piece.
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Date: 11/25/2019 12:40:00 AM
So beautiful and fully deserving of POTD... Congrats dear friend and love to you, Gina
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Date: 11/24/2019 11:58:00 PM
Beautiful, Silent One. Congratulations! ...Fran
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Date: 11/24/2019 7:57:00 PM
Words of Love Rise to the Top. Congratulations Silent One, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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Date: 11/24/2019 4:22:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 11/24/2019 3:41:00 PM
Wow ...and thanks for reviewing mine.
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Date: 11/24/2019 3:21:00 PM
I am not one bit surprised that this is shining in the light as POTD it's beautiful and so deserving....congratulations my friend :)
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Date: 11/24/2019 3:13:00 PM
Sweet romantic poem! Congrats on POTD!
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