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Desiree captured his soul that mirrors into her past. Luring eyes black as coal peers deep into waters vast. Her sleek mermaid contour silhouettes in morning sun. Glowing skin shines so pure suits the silk that looks newly spun. She stares beyond her reflection that no one else can see. Her eyes fix in sole direction hair to the wind flies free. Blossoms fill mist with sweet scent dispersing her seductive essence. Longs only for her lost gent who filled her heart in adolescence. Desiree; he whispers with the wind pulling her ever close inside. Her aching heart wishes to ascend since she can never be his bride. Copyright © 2011 By Caryl S. Muzzey Fourth Place Winner ~ "Reflection” Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet March 18, 2011

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Date: 7/13/2015 12:55:00 PM
Congrat.I like your poem and... Her sleek mermaid contour/silhouettes in morning sunverse/ Best wishes and Great expectations forDesiree...
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Date: 7/9/2015 11:50:00 PM
I really love this one. To long for a love you can't have is a struggle I've been through. This hit my heart like spear. Keep them coming. I would love to read more and more. They are so smart
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Date: 7/7/2015 9:29:00 AM
Congratulation on your win having 4th place in the contest with this beautiful poem, my lovely friend. loved always,bl
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Date: 7/7/2015 12:12:00 PM
Thank you BL, I'm glad you enjoyed it. ~Caryl
Date: 7/6/2015 7:26:00 PM
Nice read. Thoroughly enjoyed it.
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Date: 7/6/2015 6:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Like the siren who captivated Ulysses.
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Date: 7/6/2015 3:41:00 PM
Caryl: I don't know anything about this contest but you have done an enjoyable piece here. Such wonderful word pictures make me want to "dive" right in. :o) Thanks for sharing. oldbuck
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Date: 3/3/2011 1:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your very fine win in the contest, Caryl! Beautiful! Love, Annalise
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Date: 3/2/2011 11:54:00 AM
Congratulations Caryl on your fine win in Constance's wonderful contest....:)
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Date: 3/1/2011 1:27:00 PM
Neat idea., She is looking into her past. I like this approach and am happy to finally see this winning poem. Congratulations, caryl!
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Date: 2/28/2011 8:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Caryl in Constance's contest "Reflection". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/26/2011 5:01:00 PM
LCongratulations on lyour big win with this lovely entry. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/26/2011 4:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/26/2011 11:00:00 AM
Congrats Caryl on your wonderful win in the Reflections contest .. so happy to be sharing the winners list with a good friend luv..
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Date: 2/26/2011 7:43:00 AM
Caryl, good to see you at the top again. Congratulations on your worthy poem's fourth place honor in Constance's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/26/2011 6:10:00 AM
Congrats to you on your fine win..The line that stays with me is "hair to the wind flies free"..that is just gorgeous. BG
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Date: 2/25/2011 10:47:00 PM
good to see your result in the winning entry Caryl, all the best.
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Date: 2/25/2011 8:00:00 PM
So imaginative and creative. Beautiful. Many congratulations for this big win.
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Date: 2/25/2011 6:35:00 PM
Congrats Caryl on your big win in the contest of Constance----kashinath
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Date: 2/25/2011 6:25:00 PM
subtlely sullen and wonderful.. congrats, caryl!! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/25/2011 5:53:00 PM
A sad, but sweet entry, Caryl. Congratulations on winning in Constance's contest with this fine entry.
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Date: 2/25/2011 5:45:00 PM
Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest of Constance, Caryl
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Date: 2/20/2011 1:53:00 PM
Oh such love is in this rhyme.Enjoyed very much.Thanks for the comment and the congrats.~LOTS OF LOVE~Teresa
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Date: 2/20/2011 6:33:00 AM
A very good entry for the contest.. I wouldn't want to judge this one... Thank you for reading my work, your comments touch me...luv Michael
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Date: 2/19/2011 8:49:00 AM
Oh just lovely, Caryl! I am still struggling with this one....you have written a sad but lovely story that Constance will love!
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Date: 2/19/2011 7:06:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest.
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