I am not so cynical, I just for fun tried to write something from an opposite point of view. There are many with sweet words, who ooze love yet are full of bias and hate.
All lovely words when understood All so misconstrued silence envelopes our delusions Desire, we lust the attention at the forfeit of philosophy Love, we crave at Kings expense at times Sacrificing those whom love us true spilling blood at humanities alter Romance, we desire for loves embrace knowing serpents sell snake oil remedies Beware the soft spoken cringe when you hear words only a token Seeking the truth, not platitude discover love, in those that......... Breathe actions, not poetic verse
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