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I am not so cynical, I just for fun tried to write something from an opposite point of view. There are many with sweet words, who ooze love yet are full of bias and hate.

All lovely words when understood All so misconstrued silence envelopes our delusions Desire, we lust the attention at the forfeit of philosophy Love, we crave at Kings expense at times Sacrificing those whom love us true spilling blood at humanities alter Romance, we desire for loves embrace knowing serpents sell snake oil remedies Beware the soft spoken cringe when you hear words only a token Seeking the truth, not platitude discover love, in those that......... Breathe actions, not poetic verse

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White Wolf

Date: 6/19/2018 1:01:00 PM

How did I miss this one, Art? So many great lines, where does one start? From the end? I can't believe someone would call this "wordy"? For aren't words the poet's tools? I can't stop looking at the ending! Beauty, matey /|\

James Swartz

Date: 6/3/2018 12:34:00 PM

Words in the wrong hands can start a religion or a war. Words can bring peace and harmony. Knowing who to listen to and who to sacrifice is the hard part. If only we all could breathe actions into the poetic verse.

Gary Bateman

Date: 6/3/2018 5:20:00 AM

Hello Art, Congratulations on the POTD honor here!! A FAVE in my book here. The last verse is the perfect close. Cheers and Best, Gary

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/2/2018 8:37:00 PM

Clever poem, Arthur. The picture goes really well with it! It's good when you pop in and visit me!!

Charlie Smith

Date: 6/2/2018 12:32:00 PM

Great last line Arthur, congratulations for POTD honors...

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/1/2018 2:54:00 PM

I agree Arthur with actions revealing more than words. Congratulations on this wonderful poem being honored with POTD! : )

Chris Hagy

Date: 6/1/2018 9:23:00 AM

Excellent and profound! Well deserved POTD :)...actions do always speak louder than words...love last line.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/30/2018 5:30:00 PM

Great choice for POTD Arthur. Congrats and well deserved.

Susan Gentry

Date: 5/30/2018 2:09:00 AM

Congratulations on this POTD! Wise words here. :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 5/29/2018 5:36:00 PM

Brilliant message and a true stand to go by my good friend! We always face those that deceive as easily as breathing. As evil is ever present in this world and takes on millions of forms. A gem my friend and a fav...

Tim Smith

Date: 5/29/2018 12:50:00 PM

Brilliant closing...a mantra we should all follow

tracy storrier

Date: 5/29/2018 12:18:00 PM

Congratulations on your POTD, thanks for sharing :) x

Sunshine Smile

Date: 5/29/2018 12:09:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great p.o.t.d., Arthur :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 5/29/2018 11:40:00 AM

Congratulations POTD :)

charles messina

Date: 5/29/2018 9:43:00 AM

Every snake has two heads Arthur, although we don't always see the second one, It is there and it will bite you when least expected. Nice poem and Congrats on your POTD...Charlie

Daniel Turner

Date: 5/29/2018 9:33:00 AM

Congratulations Arthur on POTD honors. If a person has a "friend" who talks about others behind their back, you can bet that same "friend" is talking about you behind your back. A leopard never changes his spots.

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 5/29/2018 9:31:00 AM

I will fav this and refer back to it. It's right on truthful. Congratulations!

Maureen McGreavy

Date: 5/29/2018 8:58:00 AM

Back with congrats! Splendid day to you! :) xomo

JAN ALLISON

Date: 5/29/2018 8:14:00 AM

dropping back to say many congrats on POTD Arthur:-) hugs Jan xx

Phil Capitano

Date: 5/29/2018 7:34:00 AM

Actions speak louder than words ~ don't be fooled by the silver-tongued. Great poem arthur. Congrats on POTD.

Joseph May

Date: 5/29/2018 7:30:00 AM

The delusion of love and romance with empty promises...Congrats on POTD Arthur

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 5/29/2018 5:34:00 AM

"Breathe actions, not poetic verse."! An exquisite culmination of your well crafted piece of work! A well earned acknowledgement POTD. Congratulations. Stay blessed.

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/29/2018 4:57:00 AM

WoW! Arthur, You have penned a deep and thought provoking piece. Congratulations on getting the poem of day. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Eve Roper

Date: 5/28/2018 2:55:00 PM

Words constantly spoken, but like a snake get to close and it will strike and say, "I didn't do it he did it"..

Carole Duet

Date: 5/28/2018 1:59:00 PM

A lot of truth here. I like the direct approach. Even the stubborn have their reasons and the shy their fears. I love "words" but not "wordy". My motto: KISS (keep it simple, stupid!) lol