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I shiver…. My heart beats faster in anticipation of your touch You caress me Embracing every curve of my body …. I so love a frosty day when I can wear my thermals! 11~24~16

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Just James

Date: 12/1/2016 12:24:00 PM

you got me!! well done!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/1/2016 1:21:00 PM

lol cheers James:-) hugs jan xx

John Lawless

Date: 11/27/2016 8:43:00 AM

....OH YEAH!!! a blanket, a cup of tea, and thee....

Jan Allison
Date: 11/27/2016 8:50:00 AM

That sounds perfect John lol especially the cup of tea lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Darren White

Date: 11/27/2016 2:12:00 AM

Come on Jan! Write me a poem as sensual as mine can be, and I write you a fun limerick ;)

Jan Allison
Date: 11/27/2016 8:38:00 AM

I know my limitations lol I have written a few slushy romantic ones in the past the other Darren used to write lovely romantic lines and it inspired me:-) hugs Jan xx

Darren White
Date: 11/27/2016 4:57:00 AM

Pfft. No soppy? No limerick then :p

Jan Allison
Date: 11/27/2016 4:24:00 AM

ha ha ha I can't do the romantic soppy stuff lol:-) hugs jan xx

Caycay Jennings

Date: 11/26/2016 10:42:00 AM

I wasn't caught unawares, like Paul, but sensed something afoot because 'sensual' poems aren't your thing. This was delightful and I relate, there are some sensual feelings in certain materials and, to me, also in a clean, fresh bed. Your creativity is more oft than not, my delight ... CayCay

Jan Allison
Date: 11/26/2016 11:30:00 AM

Oh I may surprise you with a romantic write one day CayCay lol but yes you are well aware of my twisted mind lol:-) Oh I agree with you about the feel of clean sheets too:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 11/25/2016 5:32:00 PM

You caught me completely unawares, Jan!! Like your thermals, I embrace every curve of your creativity:) Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 11/25/2016 5:35:00 PM

LOL Thanks Paul - I have to confess I brought my thermal vest to Malta lol but thankfully I didn't need to wear it - I do tend to feel the cold so much:-( hugs Jan xx

Paloma P

Date: 11/25/2016 2:48:00 AM

Ha, you got me... those must be some thermals Jan! :)

Jan Allison
Date: 11/25/2016 3:26:00 AM

I vowed I would never succumb to buying thermals thought they were for old grannies lol but they are the best thing for keeping warm:-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 11/24/2016 8:16:00 PM

ha! i'm glad you didn't disappoint me, jan! i expected a surprise but didn't know what it would be and i love what you came up with...

Jan Allison
Date: 11/25/2016 3:27:00 AM

Thanks Ilene it is a heavy frost again today so they will be back on:-) hugs Jan xx

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/24/2016 6:48:00 PM

A nice romantic poem, Jan. Very sensual and enchanting. It put a warm smile on my too, like it did Agnes. Love and peace to you.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/25/2016 3:29:00 AM

Thanks Freddie I do like to write with a twist I'm glad you enjoyed my poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Agnes Krampe

Date: 11/24/2016 6:01:00 PM

Jan, once again you made me smile, love the twist :) Stay warm! Agnes

Jan Allison
Date: 11/24/2016 6:06:00 PM

I will be sewn into my thermals if this cold spell continues Agnes I feel the cold so easily and it is so frosty and icy at the moment bbbbrrrr am glad I'm in the house in the warm:-) hugs jan xx

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 11/24/2016 4:17:00 PM

Lol, you had me going there for a minute Jan thinking the last line would include a man! Love those thermals too! Hugs~Che xx

Jan Allison
Date: 11/24/2016 4:26:00 PM

LOL Cheryl I love to write with a twist from time to time:-) hugs jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/24/2016 1:57:00 PM

I would rather be in warmer climate so to resolve the situation! Fine poem with a twist at the end! Love it!

Jan Allison
Date: 11/24/2016 2:21:00 PM

Thanks Demetrios I REALLY loved your romantic poem today:-) hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/24/2016 9:51:00 AM

Oh those thermals...Time for take off..Says He: ) :)..Love the juxta in the ending line dear....

Jan Allison
Date: 11/24/2016 9:55:00 AM

:-) thanks Charma its freezing here today and boy do I need them:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/24/2016 9:32:00 AM

Hi Jan, This is good. I wasn't expecting the twist at the end. Well done:-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 11/24/2016 9:46:00 AM

Thanks Alexis I do like to write with a twist from time to time:-) hugs Jan xx

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 11/24/2016 8:39:00 AM

I think you wrote the book//on how to set the hook//you always amaze//in the many ways//you give us a different look. (bit of a football analogy in there somewhere) Either way — you got me AGAIN! huggathermals! ~ j

Jan Allison
Date: 11/24/2016 8:43:00 AM

Love the comment John:-) You have to admit I am a bit twisted lol:-) We have a very heavy frost today and the thermals are on ... and i couldn't resist this poem lol:-) hugs Jan xx