Desire

Alluring breasts caressed devilishly. Ethereal fantasies, growing hard in just kissed lips. Moist new odors penetrate quivering recurring spasms. Teasing, undulating, viscous wetness; xanthic yearning zealots. 09/27/15

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/8/2015 2:13:00 AM

Wonderful write James! Congrats on superb win!

Skat A

Date: 10/4/2015 6:51:00 PM

James, Congrats on your beautiful win. Love SKAT

James Inman
Date: 10/4/2015 6:57:00 PM

Thanks SKAT

Balveen Cheema

Date: 10/3/2015 11:57:00 PM

An etheral win James! Congrats!

James Inman
Date: 10/4/2015 12:05:00 AM

Thank you, Balveen.

Mark Woods

Date: 10/3/2015 8:38:00 PM

Spicy! Congratulations on your win. Well done

James Inman
Date: 10/4/2015 12:09:00 AM

Thanks Mark.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/3/2015 7:21:00 PM

glad to see you entered it, Ralph. We both placed the same. Wheeeee! congrats.

James Inman
Date: 10/3/2015 8:27:00 PM

Thanks Andrea and the same to you.

Eve Roper

Date: 10/3/2015 5:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

James Inman
Date: 10/3/2015 5:21:00 PM

Thanks Eve.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/3/2015 4:42:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful win with this sizzling entry James!

James Inman
Date: 10/3/2015 5:21:00 PM

Connie, thank you.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 10/3/2015 4:27:00 PM

andrea knows me well - i did indeed like this one!! someone turned the heat up, going boldly where no one else dared to go...it was certainly the most explicit and erotic one, and i loved it up until the very last line when i felt that 'xanthic' didn't quite fit, but it's so difficult with those tricky last letters; with a slightly different last line it would've placed higher for sure; grieved that i couldn't give it a higher placement, but congrats on your win anyway!

James Inman
Date: 10/3/2015 5:18:00 PM

Thank you, Charlotte. I looked at that word so many times and kept trying to find something I liked better. Sizzling contest!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/3/2015 2:15:00 PM

Dropping back with my congratulations James :-) hugs Jan xx

James Inman
Date: 10/3/2015 2:40:00 PM

Thanks Jan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2015 5:09:00 PM

hey, you did AWESOME. why not enter it?? I know Charlotte, and this one is RIGHT up her alley!! (oh good grief, the captcha says HRD. hahahaha)

James Inman
Date: 9/27/2015 6:16:00 PM

I entered a little while ago. I think it was the last one. Thanks Andrea.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/27/2015 1:39:00 PM

mine looks tame in comparison James lol good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

James Inman
Date: 9/27/2015 3:10:00 PM

Thanks Jan, actually wrote it a couple of weeks ago and intended to tone it down a bit but after reading a couple of other ones. I left it the way it was.