Desire-Rhymed Senryu

Blazing, heart fire. In darkness, we conspire. Quench, hot desire. 2-1-2021 ~ 3 ~ Rhymed Senryu

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/2/2021 1:34:00 PM

awesome. I really do love rhymed ones. Maybe they could call them Rhymque!

Panagiota Romios
Date: 2/2/2021 2:55:00 PM

Lol. Not Really, but cute idea! This is the classical rhymed Senryu! As I told Caren, they are a classical form. The rhymed SENRYUS and Haikus are not a "cute" invention. They are not "kus" a term used here. I would like to see us stop inventing names for a form taught in the best universities. Re: by the classical poetry form name. I am aware of the mode in vogue here to turn things..." chic" or cool. Gee~hope I get the point across. Pangie

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/2/2021 12:25:00 PM

I agree with everything everyone else has said about your work.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 2/2/2021 2:58:00 PM

Hi Robert! How lovely and supportive a comment. Thank you, much.)) Hugs, Pangie xx

Judy Ball

Date: 2/2/2021 11:31:00 AM

Nicely done Pangie. God Bless, JB

Panagiota Romios
Date: 2/2/2021 11:38:00 AM

Good Afternoon, Judy. Thrilled you like this...so do I. Blessings. Pangie

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/2/2021 10:50:00 AM

You write these so well Pangie, a lot said in a few words. Tom

Panagiota Romios
Date: 2/2/2021 11:36:00 AM

Thanks dear, Tom! I prefer this way. It packs a punch)) Pangie

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/1/2021 7:36:00 PM

A rhyming senryu! I do not think I have ever seen one. Wow! Burning me up!

Panagiota Romios
Date: 2/2/2021 8:07:00 AM

Caren, I have written many. See my list of 1900 Poems! Woo- Hoo! Try rhymed Haikus and Rhymed Senryus. I think you'd be great at these.))) All start with capitol letters. Unlike the Haikus or Senryus that overflow here. Yes! Those few words..,call the fire engine! ))) Hugs, Pangie xx

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 2/1/2021 4:34:00 PM

One hot senryu, Pangie! You are very good at composing senryus - Bob

Panagiota Romios
Date: 2/1/2021 4:39:00 PM

Bob, thank you..,I really lime these. They pack a wallop. This was a hot one))) Thank you, Pangie