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Designer of Intent and Action

The transient existence suspended on uncertainty Poised in the state of critical balance Where life swings between living and dying As decided by the dictum of destiny. The vision, divinely bestowed treasure Enables to see the magnificence of the creator As the closed eyes open at the instant of blink The heavenly light illumines the dormant awareness. The toxic waste of living I exhale Intend to inhale life’s reviving essence The gift of God I get as the divine breath And survive another instant at His grace. The gap between intent and action Transcends the limit of free will Gets formulated by the supreme designer Within the fraction of the gifted moment of time. ________________ November 27, 2022 Contest : Just Before Release Sponsored by : Unseeking Seeker

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Date: 11/27/2022 8:37:00 PM
“The vision, divinely bestowed treasure ~ Enables to see the magnificence of the creator ~ As the closed eyes open at the instant of blink ~ The heavenly light illumines the dormant awareness.” This says it all! Warmest congratulations on your win, Subimal and for sharing your deep wisdom with us all.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 11/28/2022 1:39:00 AM
Thank you for the placement and for your encouraging comment.

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