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Like the rays of days, coming from the holes of my asbestos In my nights of dream, such character you become Like the dust floats randomly along the rays, the illusionary shapes Ditto! you appear prominent before my dreams fade At the arrival of dawn! Like the sand trickled through the neck of my hourglass In interlaced neurons of my brain, such memory you are Like the sand slips from one bulb to the other, for every inversion's Ditto! your memory traverse in my head for all tosses and turns In my sleeping hours! ~Ashok Kumar Mishra

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Francis Brown

Date: 3/22/2020 2:44:00 PM

Not bad at all!

Ashok Kumar Mishra
Date: 3/27/2020 9:20:00 AM

Thanks for stopping by Francis, :) You have looked at it from a new angle of view, seems some idea has seeded in your mind I'm glad for your feedback!! regards, Ashok

Silent One

Date: 11/4/2019 1:45:00 PM

touching poem..

Ashok Kumar Mishra
Date: 11/10/2019 4:47:00 AM

Thank you :)

Joe Dimino

Date: 11/1/2019 1:30:00 PM

For sure, some people are unforgettable--and the power they remind us, that love is immortalized in dreamscapes of our mystical, truly border-less existence.

Ashok Kumar Mishra
Date: 11/3/2019 9:30:00 AM

:) true Thanks for stopping by

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/22/2019 1:54:00 PM

Yes, some people are unforgettable. I enjoyed the similes throughout this piece. Thanks for your visit to my work.

Ashok Kumar Mishra
Date: 10/22/2019 7:27:00 PM

Thank you Eileen!

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/15/2019 11:30:00 PM

I see this is your first posting for nearly a year.. This sure is powerful poetry, love it.

Ashok Kumar Mishra
Date: 10/17/2019 11:17:00 AM

Thank you Harry.... I'm glad you loved it :)