Descent

An old net dangling in the wind's face
Shake its sandy tears in empty arms
Caught nothing it could embrace
I taste the sea's salt charm
Trickle from my eyes
Red sunset now
Bleeding skies
A bow
Sunk

Sail
Not here
My dreams, pale
Ships of despair
These broken vessels
Of vows winds have destroyed
Tides and waves my life hassles
Holes too big in nets I employed
Against the silver fleet of dread fish

So we return at the and of day
To mark the spot of our demise
Where castled our dreams of clay
On seas breast to the skies
Melted foundations
And no time left
To build yet
A deft
joy

Life -
A net
A vain strife
Edging our bet
With arthritic hands
I should have tied my dreams
With better rope than these sands
Carried about on windy streams
Stead I, a frail net, blown by the breeze
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Esquire Avatar
September 29, 2010 at 3:55 PM
Dear David, Spectacular Display of Emotions And YOUR words Woven so well throughout the Artistic POETRY I really like The Lines" I taste the sea's salt charm Trickle from my eyes, Pure Genius Thank-YOU For YOUR Gracious Comments YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG - Soup Mail Call
Muzzey Avatar
September 29, 2010 at 3:54 PM
A well penned Nonnet, great work! I enjoyed the read. Caryl
Locksley Avatar
September 29, 2010 at 1:47 PM
There must be a way to break free of the "net," David. As long as you have life, hold on to hope that the winds will carry you to a better place. Diane
Hickman Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 9:23 AM
A very skilful nonet David, I presume the shape of it was intended to appear as sails? Many thanks for your visit and comments. Gordon, (hicky)
Mehta Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 6:03 AM
Life - A vain strife edging our bet - very wonderful expressions, I enjoyed it, David
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