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Out walking- I saw huge garbage dumpsters full of words, hundreds, hundreds, hundreds of books just thrown away; words, words, words in heaps of withered ruin like dead birds. oh, without books this world will be a ravaged garden dead, the drum of time has ceased for these words- I dread; and I feel a dark pain and hang my head like a flower in decay. The depth of my deep sorrow shouts out for such a sad death, my agony for verses that glide is beyond these earthly bounds; and words, like new ghosts scream out in their last breath. If I could dear books, I would rescue you from this heap , for not even shadows will linger- just a scar of death to weep; how HORRIBLE, that words are now measured as trash in pounds. ______________________ December 25, 2018 Poetry/Rhyme/Depth of Death Copyright Protected, ID 18- 1098-172-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, 'Rhyme Time 7- Deep and Dark' sponsor- Lu Loo - Theme chosen - #1 Depth of Death First Place

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Date: 1/14/2019 4:23:00 PM
I love where you took the theme, Constance. Congratulations on your First Place win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/27/2018 9:46:00 PM
Interesting … Begs the question: Are all words sacred? Thanks for the provocative write! :) gw
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/28/2018 2:50:00 PM
It's a reasonable position...I'd say myself that the concepts of "sacred" and "sacrament(al)" have taken a savage beating over the last 200 years. So that today there are people, unfortunately, who exercise zero care with their mouths, their pens, and their keyboards---so alien is the concept of 'holiness' to them. TBC? What say you?
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Constance La France
Date: 12/28/2018 9:13:00 AM
Gershon, thanks for visiting and the comment. Well my answer to are all words sacred? Is yes they are, each fell on paper from the soul of a writer and nothing is more sacred to me than that ~
Date: 12/27/2018 1:20:00 AM
And words, like new ghosts scream out in their last breath...There are second hand bookshops here that have books no longer in print. What a terrible shame, I am mortified by this photo- I know you love books from a young age. Hurts to see this. Excellent write, Dear Heart. Best wishes for the contest!
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Constance La France
Date: 12/27/2018 4:39:00 PM
Aqua, thanks for visiting my poem, thanks for the excellent and yes I love books, especially old books, so this was horrifying to see, what is this world coming too~

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