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Departed

DEPARTED One leaf remained still there upon the tree Not gripped with will but tenuous poise - no more Brown and dry, at a touch - would crumble, cease to be Or with mere zephyr breath might fall or soar The force which we call life that could revive Departed; no more impulse to survive Thus was the shell in which she’d dwelt four score A cold wax marionette, spirit withdrawn I would not brook she was this thing I saw Which she had seeming been, I’d come to mourn Could not conceive as her in truth no other Where? vitality, wit and love that comprised my mother N/A in Contest: Move Me (July 2919) Originally submitted Feb. 2928

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Date: 8/10/2019 6:27:00 PM
Wonderful poem Geoffrey, congrats on a fine win this time round!
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 8/12/2019 4:45:00 AM
Many thanks for the chance and the win, John.
Date: 1/8/2019 3:01:00 PM
Remarkable poem-- and the sort I wish were longer--the opening metaphor is brilliant (love 'zephyr breath') as is that of the doll whose strings are no longer pulled-- kudos, my friend!
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 8/12/2019 4:44:00 AM
Sorry for the delayed response, Len. As always, your feedback is highly valued. I was pleased with the poem, too.
Date: 3/1/2018 4:02:00 PM
Touching and profound poem..
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 3/1/2018 4:09:00 PM
Your opinion is much appreciated, Silent One

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