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Deodorant

Think I'll dress in my one suit, silk shirt and handkerchief, pop in a breath mint and shine up my shoes; make that impression, look good for the ladies, with cash in my hand what have I got to lose? Yet I wish I felt better more up to the task, my suit's sure been neater, my shirt has a stain; you don't notice it, though, when I'm wearing my jacket and the hole in my pocket? I'm not one to be vain. CODA For there's no one to impress, I'm the only one I'll see, so I'll roll on some deodorant and I'll smell good for me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/29/2008 3:16:00 AM
Very good, there are times when you and i must have some ME time, that is not being selfish, but it must be done, great poertry and have a happy new year when it comes
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Date: 12/17/2008 3:59:00 PM
Cheers! Awesome. why not? Who better to impress, than oneself? So cute! Kristin
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Date: 12/17/2008 3:09:00 PM
Recite one of your beautiful poems. That would be enough. Well, you might want to consider the deodorant (lol). Well said! Love Robin
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Date: 12/17/2008 2:18:00 PM
Hey there Keith! No, I don't believe you are one to be vain:) Suits? Maybe having more than one, would be a nuisance. Ouf..imagine using up your days to press them.:( Just don't get ahold of the same tailor as in 'The Emperor's New Clothes'..he'll have you strutting around in your skivvies.:) I think that just your presence, money or no, is more than enough to woe and charm others! You truly are a sweet man! Wishing you and yours the best! God bless...Love, Mikki
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Date: 12/17/2008 9:23:00 AM
Now I'm worried about you..another fine write but from the depths.. Let me know your ok. BG
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