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Dementia

Rhythmical rocking out fourth storied window pane glimpses near faded play-dough corsages between sighs. The phone rings unanswered. Brushing her hair with whose hand is that must look for teeth soon, someone is coming may have to smile wistfully at boy afraid of birthday party clowns danced all night and into the courtyards of bloomers and buzzards armed to the teeth must be looked for the breeze lifting umbrella high hair mussed. Brushing with whose hand I held off the coast of wherever was warm like lasagne for breakfast with champions. Rhythmically rocking and brushing with whose hand grasping teeth, she asks, “Does my makeup look ok?”
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/31/2011 9:52:00 PM
What the?.....Ha,ha Good one!
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Date: 8/31/2011 1:35:00 AM
Nancy, Dementia rocks n drags ya down, what am i doing in this bloody town, who is this tart, with a shielas frown, says she loves me, looks fly blown, couldn't be the gal I own, i'm emigrating now-sers :(
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Date: 8/28/2011 10:54:00 PM
Nancy, this may appeal to NIkko. It's surreal , which is how it must be for someone with dementia. gosh, I should have thought of this. What a way to do free verse. It is so difficult for me to do it I should have pretended I had dementia. Then maybe I could have done it!!!
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Date: 8/28/2011 9:25:00 PM
You take the topic to new heights with the wild images that go on in the nightmare of madness. Great verse Nancy.
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Date: 8/28/2011 8:00:00 PM
u nailed the essence of this disturbing time of life when this occurs Nancy.. all too often must be this way.. expressive lines tell the tale so intensely luv..one day a cure?
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Date: 8/28/2011 7:40:00 PM
Wonderful write Nancy, love the shifting imagry, the dancing all night, and of course the scary clown...YIKES!!!...with love...old Jack
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Date: 8/28/2011 5:22:00 PM
Wow! This takes the topic of dementia and scores a home run, Nancy. So witty in parts -- looking for her teeth and the breakfast with champions -- but the message comes through loud and clear. Anyone who's known a person with dementia will see the insight in this amazing poem. Gret work! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/28/2011 5:22:00 PM
Just wish you had written this in time for Deb. Guzzi's earlier "stream of consciousness" contest because it would have taken the top prize!
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Date: 8/28/2011 4:27:00 PM
Your makeup looks great, baby. Well, maybe you could use a little more around your eyes; and put those teeth back in.
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Date: 8/28/2011 4:12:00 PM
Very good Poetry my dear Poet friend....always Michael
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