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Basking in mirth’s pleasure from seizure’s test striving boy blends well with Mom’s crooning voice outgrowing not delights of lullabies wafting joyous bonding blest wonderment. Around gracious love-sealed partnership-zest so oblivious of burdensome noise candid son shows secrets, devoid of lies through language Mom grasps in her discernment. By sweet kiss of innocent caress’ best dear tot greets Mom with his jubilant poise acting serene, though spastic-angst defies championing steadfast care merriment. Mom does surmount nurturing challenges' height midst thanksgiving bliss for special child's flight.
*2Corinthians 12:15 And I will very gladly spend and be spent for you; though the more abundantly I love you, the less I be loved. May 4, 2021 Modified Hybronnet (three stanzas of four lines with ABCD-ABCD-ABCD rhyme scheme then a couplet with EE rhyme) Syllables Per Line According to PS Syllable Counter: 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 1st place, "ALL YOURS (May 14)" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand; judged on 5/15/2021.

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Date: 5/5/2021 1:15:00 PM
very nice, Beata. you chose an unusual form we all need to practice more!
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