Deja Vu Future-Oriented

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"Jamais vu" is a post hoc component of déjà vu. Recurrent contact with similar people or view. Always alike the first time, but many times over. All of the people and places are odd, yet sober. This morning, recollections cram my mind. Does it remain or pass? It seems afar behind. Déjà vu: night angels dancing in my head. Is it a lack of faith or honest analysis instead? Life shows itself via vision, déjà vu, and insight. The soul is in charge of afterlife, restricting right. mental serenity and unshakeable trust in fate. Life is a lucid dream; there is no reason to wait. Déjà vu can grab us unwary as it occurs swiftly. a debate, an encounter, or just strolling shiftily. It was similar to our memories in every way. We're intrigued and curious over how to convey Everything is preserved in the library of life. On that spherical wavelength, there is strife. They shielded us from start to finale as a gallery. Save youth and lives daily despite this fallacy. A depiction of our place in the universe Alike time itself, space is on the rehearse. Undying forever in membered space-time. The passing of days evokes views and sublime I've predicted brief fights with those around. People on the street within realms of the ground They often bear a route that intersects with mine. I'm unable to find my head as I've been sipping wine. to ascertain whether this is habit or insight. Is there a hint, and is it tied to your lush sight? Is it likely that I have lived this life before? Wisdom is needed to read souls and more. 1st place contest winner Written: February 14, 2023 Deja Vu Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Unseeking Seeker

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/6/2023 2:31:00 PM

What wonderful poetic images Lasaad - "night angels dancing in my head," "library of life," "a route that intersects with mine." You really nailed the contest theme. So happy to see this at the top of the winners list! Blessings dear friend or did we just have a moment of deja vu?

Valsa George

Date: 3/2/2023 7:43:00 PM

That familiarity we all feel on sighting certain people and events, in seeing life itself, is so beautifully and logically exemplified in this great poem. Congratulations dear Lasaad on your first place win.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/14/2023 12:23:00 PM

Perhaps the question is hard to answer, but it amazes us when we ponder: Is it likely that I have lived this life before? We do encounter situations in life that feel alike those encountered before. Intriguing--as you say, my friend.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 2/14/2023 11:00:00 AM

Lasaad, I loved reading your wise insights, so elegantly expressed through these exquisite lines. Best of wishes for the contest, my friend. :)

Stephan McBride

Date: 2/14/2023 9:18:00 AM

Wow what a picture, and love this poem my friend, so gifted you are in writing, it leaves me in awe , bless you for sharing your writing with us all : )