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He scored on me with each shot he took ~ until I deflated his balls

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/6/2023 8:11:00 PM

Hilarious, Lin

Lin Lane
Date: 7/6/2023 8:32:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/4/2023 3:45:00 PM

Lin, ha ha, made me laugh!

Lin Lane
Date: 7/4/2023 4:24:00 PM

funny, Mark, but I won't be needing help replying to comments. lol Thank you Tania.

Mark Koplin
Date: 7/4/2023 3:47:00 PM

Oh thanks so much, Tania. I laughed while writing it.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/4/2023 1:51:00 PM

gee dont do this too me Lin I splurted tea over my screen lol. Talk about double entendres lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 7/4/2023 1:57:00 PM

ha ha ha

Lin Lane
Date: 7/4/2023 1:55:00 PM

Oopsie Jan. ;-). Should I give the bawdy warning like you do?

David Kavanagh

Date: 7/4/2023 1:29:00 PM

What a great Monoku Lin, yes indeed you certainly know how to release the pressure that builds up during the game lol! Brilliant one liner, cheers David

Lin Lane
Date: 7/4/2023 1:53:00 PM

I think this is where I should plead the 5th so I don’t incriminate myself. Merci, David.

Deb M

Date: 7/4/2023 7:40:00 AM

Hehe cheeky little poem there Lin!! Made me smile! Debx

Lin Lane
Date: 7/4/2023 7:43:00 AM

Why, Deb. Whatever are you suggesting? lol ;-)