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Defiance

Defiantly showing his face, He wouldn’t be put in his place. “You’ve no right to ask Me to put on a mask And my contacts I won’t let you trace!” He stormed past the guards at the store Who were stationed right next to the door While the onlookers shrugged Thinking they might get slugged If they gave him a needed what-for. It’s too bad that the virus can’t land On those doubters so we can demand That they loudly retract What their stubbornness lacked While they followed the chain of command.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 8/17/2020 6:57:00 AM
Using mask never was so efficient as now... only in mascared balls was so useful... salute alkas
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Date: 8/2/2020 2:34:00 PM
Nice limerick... You have to wonder how inept those guards were. The guy should have been seized, don't you think?! Oh, well... Such is the state of a weak-kneed country run by a Congress of lawyers and finger-pointers :) gw
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Date: 8/1/2020 10:55:00 PM
I know two people who are totally against wearing masks. Yet both of them will march to the head of a hospital admitting line demanding preferential seating.
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Date: 7/30/2020 1:09:00 PM
It is unfortunate Congress voted to increase the military budget when our nation really needs a boost in education to a point where people readily understand "pandemic" and the "social responsibility" clearly understood by ants and bees! Nothing wrong with being anti-social, they just need to be in isolation! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 7/29/2020 1:52:00 PM
His response to the pandemic may cost Trump the election. Your limerick depicts the current state of affairs very well, Ilene. Now I'm wondering it Russia is sending the "China Seeds" to unsuspecting Americans. We really don't know what to expect, except a lack of leadership.
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Date: 7/29/2020 1:40:00 PM
Many see the mask as a civil liberties issue. What I see is when the masks come off, the number of cases skyrocket. Good use of limerick form to highlight this current issue. Great rhythm, as always, and I liked the rhyme of lacked with retract.
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