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Dentures in a glass of water mouthful: Hungry little boy gobbling down a slice of tasty chocolate cake with his mouth open wide for a mouthful as he sits at a table in a restaurant Stock Photo

- Deep Serious Thoughts -

Grandfathers teeth
are strange,
says Jimmy
who is five years
They come out
of his mouth at night
He looked quite
stunned and shocked
Of all things ...
he gets a little scared
for what could happen
With his mouth full
of chocolate





A-L Andresen 15.06.2015 :)
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August 12, 2015 at 5:01 PM

So very cute my friend xxxxx :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 15, 2015 at 2:30 PM

- Thank you for visiting and comments, Debbie - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

July 3, 2015 at 2:38 PM

Wow! grandfather's smile filled his mouth is like full of chocos at night. Chocos brings smile always. Beutifully imagined this sweet serious thought. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 3, 2015 at 3:46 PM

- Dear friend Bl, thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

June 27, 2015 at 4:07 PM

Had me chuckling-cute one. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 27, 2015 at 4:59 PM

- A small smile written for fun, dear Phyllis :) - Thank you for visiting and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

June 22, 2015 at 3:16 PM

Cute one ..I got a chuckle with reading this..I wonder what he did with that mouth full of chocolate..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 22, 2015 at 3:37 PM

- Sara, thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :

June 19, 2015 at 9:13 AM

ohh, sounds like a cute Halloween, anne... hope you are having some chocos this cool Friday!.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 19, 2015 at 11:41 AM

- Thanks for visiting and comments, Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

June 18, 2015 at 10:40 PM

Hilarious!! :D Love this! 7

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 19, 2015 at 2:21 AM

- Thanks for visiting and comments, Laura - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

June 17, 2015 at 4:52 PM

ha ha dear pal lol my dad has no teeth and he always scares the kids when he takes them out excellent pen anne lise

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 18, 2015 at 2:50 AM

- A smile without teeth ...... scary :))) - Thanks for visiting and comments, my friend Liam - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

June 17, 2015 at 2:25 PM

Hello Anne-Lise Dear One . . . Well, I'm nearly "64" now and still love chocolate and candy as I did as a child. But I do understand the seriousness of this for a child. (I guess I didn't pay attention so much to my parents on this one.) BTW, I still have all of my teeth too!! Enjoyed this one much!! A Big "7" from me covered in Chocolate Syrup -- HA HA!! Best!! Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 17, 2015 at 2:39 PM

- I love chocolate me too, but eat less than before - My teeth placed on the bedside table at night, where they smile at me :))) - NO I LIE, I'VE STILL MY TEETH IN YOUR MOUTH :)))) - Thanks for the nice, sweet and lovely comments .... and the big 7, dear Gary - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

June 17, 2015 at 1:33 PM

This is food for thought, Anne Lise, even for young children:) A sweet and delightful poem! Hugs /x/ paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 17, 2015 at 1:37 PM

- Serious and scary for a child :) - Thanks for visiting and comments, Paul - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

June 16, 2015 at 10:44 PM

Charming verse, Anne-Lise. Reminds me of the poem 'I wish I'd looked after my teeth' by British Poet Pam Ayres. Check it out sometime. Viv x

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 17, 2015 at 3:41 AM

- Viv, thank you for visiting and comments - A small smile in everyday life :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France

June 16, 2015 at 8:51 PM

Anne-Lise, this is delightful, 7 I recall being frightened as a child by my toothless great grandmother, I just knew something was terribly wrong and thanks for visiting my poetry

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 17, 2015 at 4:30 AM

- Scary for a child :) - B.W., thank you for visiting a 7 and comments - A small smile in everyday life :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

June 16, 2015 at 4:54 PM

hahaha. from the mouth of babes!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 17, 2015 at 6:47 AM

- Andrea, thank you for visiting and comments - A small smile in everyday life :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Afolabi Muideen

June 16, 2015 at 3:15 PM

Lol!!!!!! A very very funny piece, thanks for shared.........A.M.

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 17, 2015 at 3:40 AM

- Afolabi, thank you for visiting and comments - A small smile in everyday life :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

June 16, 2015 at 2:17 PM

Very nice pen Anne Lise! Very cute deep serious thoughts and poem my very dear friend.It made me smile:) I enjoyed it!A 7!Wishing you a lovely week!In his light!God bless you!:) Hugs!D.

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 17, 2015 at 3:39 AM

- Dorian, thank you for visiting a 7 and comments - A small smile in everyday life :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Milton Robertson

June 16, 2015 at 7:27 AM

Simply Beautiful, Short and sweet.

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 17, 2015 at 3:38 AM

- Milton, thank you for visiting and comments - A small smile in everyday life :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

June 15, 2015 at 11:12 PM

An uplifting write Anne...Enjoyed the read!

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 16, 2015 at 3:32 AM

- Thank you for visiting and comments, Ken - A small smile in everyday life - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

June 15, 2015 at 9:52 PM

lol...wonderful write Anne...hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 16, 2015 at 3:31 AM

- Thank you for visiting and comments, Joseph - A small smile in everyday life - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

June 15, 2015 at 9:26 PM

A delightful write, Anne-Lise! Made me chuckle. Love, Kim

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 16, 2015 at 3:31 AM

- Thank you for visiting and comments, Kim - A small smile in everyday life - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

June 15, 2015 at 2:59 PM

aww, yeah that could really shock a child, hope he brushes after that chocolate... Big :) Smiles :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 16, 2015 at 3:29 AM

- I hope so too :) - Thank you for visiting and comments, Casarah - A small smile in everyday life - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

June 15, 2015 at 2:44 PM

Hi Anne Lise: I really enjoyed that (HAHA)

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 16, 2015 at 3:28 AM

- Thanks for visiting and comments, Ralph - A small smile in everyday life - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian

June 15, 2015 at 2:39 PM

:) Oh dear....children and the things they worry about, Sunshine. Cute! Sending hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 16, 2015 at 3:28 AM

- Serious and scary for a child :) - Thanks for visiting and comments, Eileen - A small smile in everyday life - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

June 15, 2015 at 2:07 PM

ha ha ha - love it Anne Lise:-) Hugs jan xx 7

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 16, 2015 at 3:26 AM

- Thanks for visit a 7 and comments, Jan :) - A small smile in everyday life :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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