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Deep Inclinations

I’ve got those baby I want you things on my mind Those ooh baby, pleasured bodies intertwined She knows all the right places and my pump’s primed exploration ecstasy, wondering what I will find nasty deeds, my mom said would make me go blind Up down backwards, slippery slide inclined Cataclysmic dual explosions as we grind Lick lips eclipse finding the place that drips She hold the covers and bites her lips I control her vibrating gyrating hips “Oh don’t stop!” as deep inside my tongue slips I don’t need no cuffs or whips I make her so happy she does back flips She’s drug free and still her mind trips Faster, slower, what she wants she doesn’t know She loves how I make her tingle from head to toe Flush skin, that delicious heated she needs me glow I’m Double Dutch flicking, she’s rocking to and fro I wind her tight and right like a well strung bow Pull back release, hit the spot gently blow Precision accuracy I find the perfect place to go She pushes me pulls me, rips at my hair I could be bald but I don’t care She pulls me up so she can grab me there Minutes hours she answers every prayer Where I begin and she ends I am unaware Release vibrations the ultimate share as into each other’s eyes we stare!

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/14/2018 11:24:00 AM

I have a novel for you, my friend. It's called "The Victorian." Although it's from another era, so to speak, it contains the unadulterated fantasies of tightly corseted and tuxedoed Victorians. I think you'd get a kick out of it, at least for a few pages. Comment: Whew! Your inspiration hath produced pure perspiration. ~ gw

Lyric Man

Date: 8/12/2018 3:05:00 AM

Richard.. calories are not all that’s burning here ;) Hot, leaving little to the imagination!

Vladislav Raven

Date: 8/10/2018 9:05:00 AM

Hi Richard, time i think for me to have that cold shower. A sensual ride through such strong feelings. You paint the mind's canvas with such strong visions. One loses oneself in the words. You put me to shame when it comes to the sensual my friend. The passion, the desire, the sensuality flows. An excellent write Richard. Have a wonderful Friday. Your friend always....Mike.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/11/2018 7:52:00 AM

Ha ha, why not find your love and go to Happy town?

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/8/2018 2:48:00 PM

Helo Richard ,I speechless.......Have a nice day my friend.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/9/2018 7:44:00 AM

You too, thanks Darlene.

Mama Bear

Date: 8/4/2018 9:46:00 PM

I knew I should have stopped you from reading those romance novels They certainly got you motivated Very interesting side of you I have not known Keep up the good writing Love you

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/4/2018 11:19:00 PM

Ha, ha, thanks mom. I’m still not blind but I’m working on it. Love Rick.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2018 6:55:00 PM

my goodness, Richard, what a side to yourself you are showing us. Making half the other guys feel inferior now. hahaha. (you know they are!!) I dub thee Soup's male version of Danielle Steel.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/4/2018 7:41:00 PM

*lol* I am honoured by the title. Thanks for the great comment!

Emile Pinet

Date: 8/4/2018 1:03:00 PM

This reads as a sensuous poem with a sexual energy that surges from your descriptive words, aided by superb use of imagery and suggestive phrases. The rhythm and story line are perfect and flow with a seductive, provocative beat. Emile.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/4/2018 6:35:00 PM

Thanks Emile.;0)

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/4/2018 10:19:00 AM

Whew! I need a cold shower. A passionate piece Richard...

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/4/2018 6:36:00 PM

Thanks Charlie.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 8/3/2018 8:06:00 PM

Oh my!! This is a very intimate moment between lovers. Even though I feel as though I shouldn't be- one can't help but linger in these words for a moment longer. Made my heart flutter wildly. Soft sigh. ~ Brandy

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/4/2018 9:12:00 AM

Comment of the day Brandy, thanks for the visit.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 8/3/2018 2:08:00 PM

Another side of Richard whom I was not aware. A wickedly woven tale of sensuality. I really enjoyed this suggestive tale!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/4/2018 9:13:00 AM

Thanks Ralph, it was a fun one to write.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/3/2018 1:30:00 PM

rich, this is wickedly hot and really cool at the same time... what a peak experience, playfully crafted... d h lawrence must be reeling in his grave... huggs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/4/2018 9:14:00 AM

That would be something to see. Hugs Rick.

Anna Hopper

Date: 8/3/2018 10:14:00 AM

Whoa! Pretty vivid, my friend. Very accurate too. The best kind of poem for 11 a.m. on a Friday. Thanks bro

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/4/2018 9:16:00 AM

Hi Anna, I didn’t know if anyone would comment on this one. Thanks for dropping by and adding a smile to my morning.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/3/2018 2:15:00 AM

You're at 69 views!!! ;) Mine makes it 70. Must keep the mischief to a minimum. I'm faving this. Check out my latest...

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/3/2018 9:02:00 AM

On my way. ;0)

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 8/3/2018 12:08:00 AM

A very bold romp, oh mischievous scribe ! Salute !

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/3/2018 9:24:00 AM

Thanks Lawrence.

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/2/2018 10:25:00 PM

Wow! Richard, every line just sizzles with steamy, sexy lusciousness. The intensity builds to the beautiful climax (no pun intended.. ok, maybe it was.. lol!) of your last three lines.. whew! Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/3/2018 9:29:00 AM

Ha ha, great comment...

Charles Messina

Date: 8/2/2018 9:06:00 PM

Excellent write, Richard. But this kind of reminded me of my 2 year granddaughter (lol) she really had hold of my hair and wouldn't let go this morning. Nice! Charlie

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/3/2018 9:32:00 AM

Thanks Charles.

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/2/2018 5:57:00 PM

Superbly hot and sizzling...ouch!...^WW^

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/2/2018 6:05:00 PM

;0) thanks.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/2/2018 3:53:00 PM

WOW! This is choreographed so well in sizzling words, Richard..every action floats in front of the reader..Well written..burning HOT!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/2/2018 6:06:00 PM

Thanks Vijay.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/2/2018 3:30:00 PM

Sweet... decadently delicious. The perfect description of what it's meant to be. This is the perfect lover. On a side note...I do hope she goes easy on the hair pulling because I've always thought you have lovely salt and pepper hair... ;) hair pulling has its place, though always picture it the other way around...Hmmmm... I'm getting distracted. Great write. Let's hope the "police" don't mess with this sensual treat...

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/2/2018 3:42:00 PM

That's a relief... your hair is amazing. ;)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/2/2018 3:35:00 PM

Ha ha, I still have a full head of hair. Hugs Rick.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/2/2018 9:20:00 AM

Wow ,a steaming hot verse Richard. Cold shower time, well written though. Tom

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/2/2018 2:47:00 PM

Thanks Tom, just being a bit naughty.