Richard Lamoureux Poet Monorhyme

Deep Inclinations

I’ve got those baby I want you things on my mind
Those ooh baby, pleasured bodies intertwined
She knows all the right places and my pump’s primed
exploration ecstasy, wondering what I will find
nasty deeds, my mom said would make me go blind
Up down backwards, slippery slide inclined 
Cataclysmic dual explosions as we grind

Lick lips eclipse finding the place that drips
She hold the covers and bites her lips
I control her vibrating gyrating hips
“Oh don’t stop!” as deep inside my tongue slips
I don’t need no cuffs or whips
I make her so happy she does back flips
She’s drug free and still her mind trips

Faster, slower, what she wants she doesn’t know
She loves how I make her tingle from head to toe
Flush skin, that delicious heated she needs me glow
I’m Double Dutch flicking, she’s rocking to and fro 
I wind her tight and right like a well strung bow
Pull back release, hit the spot gently blow
Precision accuracy I find the perfect place to go

She pushes me pulls me, rips at my hair
I could be bald but I don’t care
She pulls me up so she can grab me there
Minutes hours she answers every prayer
Where I begin and she ends I am unaware 
Release vibrations the ultimate share
as into each other’s eyes we stare!

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Gershon Wolf August 14, 2018 at 11:24 AM I have a novel for you, my friend. It's called "The Victorian." Although it's from another era, so to speak, it contains the unadulterated fantasies of tightly corseted and tuxedoed Victorians. I think you'd get a kick out of it, at least for a few pages. Comment: Whew! Your inspiration hath produced pure perspiration. ~ gw

Lyric Man August 12, 2018 at 3:05 AM Richard.. calories are not all that’s burning here ;) Hot, leaving little to the imagination!

Vladislav Raven August 10, 2018 at 9:05 AM Hi Richard, time i think for me to have that cold shower. A sensual ride through such strong feelings. You paint the mind's canvas with such strong visions. One loses oneself in the words. You put me to shame when it comes to the sensual my friend. The passion, the desire, the sensuality flows. An excellent write Richard. Have a wonderful Friday. Your friend always....Mike. Richard Lamoureux August 11, 2018 at 7:52 AM Ha ha, why not find your love and go to Happy town?

Darlene De Beaulieu August 8, 2018 at 2:48 PM Helo Richard ,I speechless.......Have a nice day my friend. Richard Lamoureux August 9, 2018 at 7:44 AM You too, thanks Darlene.

Mama Bear August 4, 2018 at 9:46 PM I knew I should have stopped you from reading those romance novels They certainly got you motivated Very interesting side of you I have not known Keep up the good writing Love you Richard Lamoureux August 4, 2018 at 11:19 PM Ha, ha, thanks mom. I’m still not blind but I’m working on it. Love Rick.

Andrea Dietrich August 4, 2018 at 6:55 PM my goodness, Richard, what a side to yourself you are showing us. Making half the other guys feel inferior now. hahaha. (you know they are!!) I dub thee Soup's male version of Danielle Steel. Richard Lamoureux August 4, 2018 at 7:41 PM *lol* I am honoured by the title. Thanks for the great comment!

Emile Pinet August 4, 2018 at 1:03 PM This reads as a sensuous poem with a sexual energy that surges from your descriptive words, aided by superb use of imagery and suggestive phrases. The rhythm and story line are perfect and flow with a seductive, provocative beat. Emile. Richard Lamoureux August 4, 2018 at 6:35 PM Thanks Emile.;0)

Charlie Smith August 4, 2018 at 10:19 AM Whew! I need a cold shower. A passionate piece Richard... Richard Lamoureux August 4, 2018 at 6:36 PM Thanks Charlie.

Brandy Nicole August 3, 2018 at 8:06 PM Oh my!! This is a very intimate moment between lovers. Even though I feel as though I shouldn't be- one can't help but linger in these words for a moment longer. Made my heart flutter wildly. Soft sigh. ~ Brandy Richard Lamoureux August 4, 2018 at 9:12 AM Comment of the day Brandy, thanks for the visit.

Ralph Sergi August 3, 2018 at 2:08 PM Another side of Richard whom I was not aware. A wickedly woven tale of sensuality. I really enjoyed this suggestive tale! Richard Lamoureux August 4, 2018 at 9:13 AM Thanks Ralph, it was a fun one to write.

Nette Onclaud August 3, 2018 at 1:30 PM rich, this is wickedly hot and really cool at the same time... what a peak experience, playfully crafted... d h lawrence must be reeling in his grave... huggs Richard Lamoureux August 4, 2018 at 9:14 AM That would be something to see. Hugs Rick.

Anna Hopper August 3, 2018 at 10:14 AM Whoa! Pretty vivid, my friend. Very accurate too. The best kind of poem for 11 a.m. on a Friday. Thanks bro Richard Lamoureux August 4, 2018 at 9:16 AM Hi Anna, I didn’t know if anyone would comment on this one. Thanks for dropping by and adding a smile to my morning.

Eileen Manassian August 3, 2018 at 2:15 AM You're at 69 views!!! ;) Mine makes it 70. Must keep the mischief to a minimum. I'm faving this. Check out my latest... Richard Lamoureux August 3, 2018 at 9:02 AM On my way. ;0)

Lawrence Sharp August 3, 2018 at 12:08 AM A very bold romp, oh mischievous scribe ! Salute ! Richard Lamoureux August 3, 2018 at 9:24 AM Thanks Lawrence.

Susan Ashley August 2, 2018 at 10:25 PM Wow! Richard, every line just sizzles with steamy, sexy lusciousness. The intensity builds to the beautiful climax (no pun intended.. ok, maybe it was.. lol!) of your last three lines.. whew! Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan Richard Lamoureux August 3, 2018 at 9:29 AM Ha ha, great comment...

Charles Messina August 2, 2018 at 9:06 PM Excellent write, Richard. But this kind of reminded me of my 2 year granddaughter (lol) she really had hold of my hair and wouldn't let go this morning. Nice! Charlie Richard Lamoureux August 3, 2018 at 9:32 AM Thanks Charles.

Winged Warrior August 2, 2018 at 5:57 PM Superbly hot and sizzling...ouch!...^WW^ Richard Lamoureux August 2, 2018 at 6:05 PM ;0) thanks.

Vijay Pandit August 2, 2018 at 3:53 PM WOW! This is choreographed so well in sizzling words, Richard..every action floats in front of the reader..Well written..burning HOT! Richard Lamoureux August 2, 2018 at 6:06 PM Thanks Vijay.

Eileen Manassian August 2, 2018 at 3:30 PM Sweet... decadently delicious. The perfect description of what it's meant to be. This is the perfect lover. On a side note...I do hope she goes easy on the hair pulling because I've always thought you have lovely salt and pepper hair... ;) hair pulling has its place, though always picture it the other way around...Hmmmm... I'm getting distracted. Great write. Let's hope the "police" don't mess with this sensual treat... Eileen Manassian August 2, 2018 at 3:42 PM That's a relief... your hair is amazing. ;) Richard Lamoureux August 2, 2018 at 3:35 PM Ha ha, I still have a full head of hair. Hugs Rick.

Tom Cunningham August 2, 2018 at 9:20 AM Wow ,a steaming hot verse Richard. Cold shower time, well written though. Tom Richard Lamoureux August 2, 2018 at 2:47 PM Thanks Tom, just being a bit naughty.