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Deep Inclinations

I’ve got those baby I want you things on my mind
Those ooh baby, pleasured bodies intertwined
She knows all the right places and my pump’s primed
exploration ecstasy, wondering what I will find
nasty deeds, my mom said would make me go blind
Up down backwards, slippery slide inclined 
Cataclysmic dual explosions as we grind

Lick lips eclipse finding the place that drips
She hold the covers and bites her lips
I control her vibrating gyrating hips
“Oh don’t stop!” as deep inside my tongue slips
I don’t need no cuffs or whips
I make her so happy she does back flips
She’s drug free and still her mind trips

Faster, slower, what she wants she doesn’t know
She loves how I make her tingle from head to toe
Flush skin, that delicious heated she needs me glow
I’m Double Dutch flicking, she’s rocking to and fro 
I wind her tight and right like a well strung bow
Pull back release, hit the spot gently blow
Precision accuracy I find the perfect place to go

She pushes me pulls me, rips at my hair
I could be bald but I don’t care
She pulls me up so she can grab me there
Minutes hours she answers every prayer
Where I begin and she ends I am unaware 
Release vibrations the ultimate share
as into each other’s eyes we stare!

Copyright © Richard Lamoureux | Year Posted 2018

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Gershon Wolf Date: 8/14/2018 11:24:00 AM I have a novel for you, my friend. It's called "The Victorian." Although it's from another era, so to speak, it contains the unadulterated fantasies of tightly corseted and tuxedoed Victorians. I think you'd get a kick out of it, at least for a few pages. Comment: Whew! Your inspiration hath produced pure perspiration. ~ gw Login to Reply

Lyric Man Date: 8/12/2018 3:05:00 AM Richard.. calories are not all that’s burning here ;) Hot, leaving little to the imagination! Login to Reply

Vladislav Raven Date: 8/10/2018 9:05:00 AM Hi Richard, time i think for me to have that cold shower. A sensual ride through such strong feelings. You paint the mind's canvas with such strong visions. One loses oneself in the words. You put me to shame when it comes to the sensual my friend. The passion, the desire, the sensuality flows. An excellent write Richard. Have a wonderful Friday. Your friend always....Mike. Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/11/2018 7:52:00 AM Ha ha, why not find your love and go to Happy town?

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 8/8/2018 2:48:00 PM Helo Richard ,I speechless.......Have a nice day my friend. Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/9/2018 7:44:00 AM You too, thanks Darlene.

Mama Bear Date: 8/4/2018 9:46:00 PM I knew I should have stopped you from reading those romance novels They certainly got you motivated Very interesting side of you I have not known Keep up the good writing Love you Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/4/2018 11:19:00 PM Ha, ha, thanks mom. I’m still not blind but I’m working on it. Love Rick.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/4/2018 6:55:00 PM my goodness, Richard, what a side to yourself you are showing us. Making half the other guys feel inferior now. hahaha. (you know they are!!) I dub thee Soup's male version of Danielle Steel. Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/4/2018 7:41:00 PM *lol* I am honoured by the title. Thanks for the great comment!

Emile Pinet Date: 8/4/2018 1:03:00 PM This reads as a sensuous poem with a sexual energy that surges from your descriptive words, aided by superb use of imagery and suggestive phrases. The rhythm and story line are perfect and flow with a seductive, provocative beat. Emile. Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/4/2018 6:35:00 PM Thanks Emile.;0)

Charlie Smith Date: 8/4/2018 10:19:00 AM Whew! I need a cold shower. A passionate piece Richard... Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/4/2018 6:36:00 PM Thanks Charlie.

Brandy Nicole Date: 8/3/2018 8:06:00 PM Oh my!! This is a very intimate moment between lovers. Even though I feel as though I shouldn't be- one can't help but linger in these words for a moment longer. Made my heart flutter wildly. Soft sigh. ~ Brandy Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/4/2018 9:12:00 AM Comment of the day Brandy, thanks for the visit.

Ralph Sergi Date: 8/3/2018 2:08:00 PM Another side of Richard whom I was not aware. A wickedly woven tale of sensuality. I really enjoyed this suggestive tale! Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/4/2018 9:13:00 AM Thanks Ralph, it was a fun one to write.

Nette Onclaud Date: 8/3/2018 1:30:00 PM rich, this is wickedly hot and really cool at the same time... what a peak experience, playfully crafted... d h lawrence must be reeling in his grave... huggs Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/4/2018 9:14:00 AM That would be something to see. Hugs Rick.

Anna Hopper Date: 8/3/2018 10:14:00 AM Whoa! Pretty vivid, my friend. Very accurate too. The best kind of poem for 11 a.m. on a Friday. Thanks bro Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/4/2018 9:16:00 AM Hi Anna, I didn’t know if anyone would comment on this one. Thanks for dropping by and adding a smile to my morning.

Eileen Manassian Date: 8/3/2018 2:15:00 AM You're at 69 views!!! ;) Mine makes it 70. Must keep the mischief to a minimum. I'm faving this. Check out my latest... Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/3/2018 9:02:00 AM On my way. ;0)

Lawrence Sharp Date: 8/3/2018 12:08:00 AM A very bold romp, oh mischievous scribe ! Salute ! Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/3/2018 9:24:00 AM Thanks Lawrence.

Susan Ashley Date: 8/2/2018 10:25:00 PM Wow! Richard, every line just sizzles with steamy, sexy lusciousness. The intensity builds to the beautiful climax (no pun intended.. ok, maybe it was.. lol!) of your last three lines.. whew! Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/3/2018 9:29:00 AM Ha ha, great comment...

Charles Messina Date: 8/2/2018 9:06:00 PM Excellent write, Richard. But this kind of reminded me of my 2 year granddaughter (lol) she really had hold of my hair and wouldn't let go this morning. Nice! Charlie Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/3/2018 9:32:00 AM Thanks Charles.

Winged Warrior Date: 8/2/2018 5:57:00 PM Superbly hot and sizzling...ouch!...^WW^ Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/2/2018 6:05:00 PM ;0) thanks.

Vijay Pandit Date: 8/2/2018 3:53:00 PM WOW! This is choreographed so well in sizzling words, Richard..every action floats in front of the reader..Well written..burning HOT! Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/2/2018 6:06:00 PM Thanks Vijay.

Eileen Manassian Date: 8/2/2018 3:30:00 PM Sweet... decadently delicious. The perfect description of what it's meant to be. This is the perfect lover. On a side note...I do hope she goes easy on the hair pulling because I've always thought you have lovely salt and pepper hair... ;) hair pulling has its place, though always picture it the other way around...Hmmmm... I'm getting distracted. Great write. Let's hope the "police" don't mess with this sensual treat... Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 8/2/2018 3:42:00 PM That's a relief... your hair is amazing. ;) Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/2/2018 3:35:00 PM Ha ha, I still have a full head of hair. Hugs Rick.

Tom Cunningham Date: 8/2/2018 9:20:00 AM Wow ,a steaming hot verse Richard. Cold shower time, well written though. Tom Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/2/2018 2:47:00 PM Thanks Tom, just being a bit naughty.