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Deep Dark Jungle

Deep Dark Jungle Jungle dense dark deep. Sun rays try to peep. Jungle dense deep dark Up watches sky-lark. 5 Syllables per line. Wujue form 03/23/17 Form J-Jueju Contest by Broken Wings

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Date: 3/29/2017 1:02:00 PM
the shorter jueju is much harder to write, you did well, rearranging the words in line 3.
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