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The Deep Well

remembering nostalgic days when idealists aspiring to feel zen would immerse in ink their fountain pen to inscribe deep poems now and then Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~SUNSETTING WHISPERS~ 2020 AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on January 13, 2020 for contest WHEN AND THEN sponsored by JENISH SOMADAS - RANKED 4TH

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Date: 3/13/2020 8:14:00 PM
Line, does this fall into your zen category or short poems category? Both, I suppose. Great nostalgic write ~ John
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Date: 3/13/2020 10:56:00 PM
Short. LOL
Date: 1/23/2020 8:09:00 PM
I really like your four-liner!! Congrats.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/23/2020 9:44:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Most appreciated.
Date: 1/23/2020 1:20:00 PM
- Congratulations on a great 4th place in the contest, Line ... when I read all these contributions ... I'm glad I'm not the one to judge ... - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/23/2020 9:44:00 PM
Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, Sunshine.
Date: 1/23/2020 10:29:00 AM
True poetry at it's best. Congratulations - Line
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Date: 1/23/2020 9:45:00 PM
Thank you so much, Michael, for your most appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 1/23/2020 6:57:00 AM
Beautifully penned.. Congrats on your winning poem and thanks for participating in the contest..
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/23/2020 9:45:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jenish, for hosting this fun contest.
Date: 1/15/2020 5:45:00 AM
I have a new "fav".
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/23/2020 9:45:00 PM
Thank you so much, ML. Most appreciated.
Date: 1/14/2020 1:29:00 PM
Line, your poem reminds me of the '60s and '70s, when idealists were writing poems against the war in Vietnam. Stunning, my friend. Surely a contest winner! Hugs, Carolyn
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/14/2020 3:34:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Carolyn. Most appreciated.
Date: 1/14/2020 1:08:00 PM
Nice one... I do this often.
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Date: 1/14/2020 3:34:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, SO.
Date: 1/13/2020 8:12:00 PM
Wow, 'the nostalgia' caught me totally by surprise, Line. Great entry! Best of luck, Gershon
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/13/2020 9:50:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment, Gershon.
Date: 1/13/2020 5:40:00 PM
“Deep poems now and then”- fantastically true Line.
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Date: 1/13/2020 9:50:00 PM
Thanks, Caren.
Date: 1/13/2020 4:04:00 PM
Very nice Line :)
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Date: 1/13/2020 4:47:00 PM
Thanks, Heidi.

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