Line Gauthier Poet Monorhyme

The Deep Well

remembering nostalgic days when
idealists aspiring to feel zen
would immerse in ink their fountain pen
to inscribe deep poems now and then



Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~SUNSETTING WHISPERS~ 2020

AP: Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on January 13, 2020 for contest WHEN AND THEN sponsored by JENISH SOMADAS  -  RANKED 4TH

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John Watt March 13, 2020 at 8:14 PM Line, does this fall into your zen category or short poems category? Both, I suppose. Great nostalgic write ~ John Line Gauthier March 13, 2020 at 10:56 PM Short. LOL

Andrea Dietrich January 23, 2020 at 8:09 PM I really like your four-liner!! Congrats. Line Gauthier January 23, 2020 at 9:44 PM Thanks, Andrea. Most appreciated.

Anne-Lise Andresen January 23, 2020 at 1:20 PM - Congratulations on a great 4th place in the contest, Line ... when I read all these contributions ... I'm glad I'm not the one to judge ... - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Line Gauthier January 23, 2020 at 9:44 PM Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, Sunshine.

Michael Craig January 23, 2020 at 10:29 AM True poetry at it's best. Congratulations - Line Line Gauthier January 23, 2020 at 9:45 PM Thank you so much, Michael, for your most appreciated visit and comment.

Jenish Somadas January 23, 2020 at 6:57 AM Beautifully penned.. Congrats on your winning poem and thanks for participating in the contest.. Line Gauthier January 23, 2020 at 9:45 PM Thank you so much, Jenish, for hosting this fun contest.

M. L. Kiser January 15, 2020 at 5:45 AM I have a new "fav". Line Gauthier January 23, 2020 at 9:45 PM Thank you so much, ML. Most appreciated.

Carolyn Devonshire January 14, 2020 at 1:29 PM Line, your poem reminds me of the '60s and '70s, when idealists were writing poems against the war in Vietnam. Stunning, my friend. Surely a contest winner! Hugs, Carolyn Line Gauthier January 14, 2020 at 3:34 PM Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Carolyn. Most appreciated.

Silent One January 14, 2020 at 1:08 PM Nice one... I do this often. Line Gauthier January 14, 2020 at 3:34 PM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, SO.

Gershon Wolf January 13, 2020 at 8:12 PM Wow, 'the nostalgia' caught me totally by surprise, Line. Great entry! Best of luck, Gershon Line Gauthier January 13, 2020 at 9:50 PM Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment, Gershon.

Caren Krutsinger January 13, 2020 at 5:40 PM “Deep poems now and then”- fantastically true Line. Line Gauthier January 13, 2020 at 9:50 PM Thanks, Caren.

Heidi Sands January 13, 2020 at 4:04 PM Very nice Line :) Line Gauthier January 13, 2020 at 4:47 PM Thanks, Heidi.