DECIDUOUS

DECIDUOUS

My leaves are memories of an earlier time
As in the scheme of things, I’ll heed the call
And when the season comes, I let them fall
But nature offers just that kind of rhyme
To keep them are as steps I cannot climb
And winter in my mind, it builds a wall
My thoughts may fade with farewells to them all
Each functional and handsome in their prime
I’m sad when I accept they have to go
To lie there still, or flutter in the breeze
Such recollections really cannot last
Yet golden as they were, it’s time, I know
I sense that I am resonant with trees
My mind now bare of everything that’s passed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Kauffman Avatar
September 25, 2024 at 10:34 AM
Howard, congratulations on your win. I love the perspective of the poem spoken by the tree and the last two lines are a perfect summation to you sonnet taking us into your mind. Blessings to you!
Poteet Avatar
September 16, 2024 at 9:46 PM
Howard, congratulations on your sonnet here on the deciduous nature of events, people perhaps, even memories throughout life. A wholly reasonable sestet comparing again ourselves to trees and the acceptance of the inevitable death which comes to all. I give it a ten for the simple message well-said.
Miller Avatar
September 16, 2024 at 1:20 AM
Wonderful sonnet, congratulations
Ashley Avatar
September 15, 2024 at 9:32 PM
Dear Howard, you poetic expression is beautiful and eloquent. I enjoyed the deep, rich emotion conveyed in your poem. Lovely rhythm and rhymes so poignantly framed. Congratulations for your success in Craig’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Delaney Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 5:34 AM
Wonderful analogy to nature, Howard. I really enjoyed your metaphor how well it flowed. SuZ
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